• Published 29th May 2020
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Logical Leap And The Murder Of Maids - Sinful Gold



Logical Leap travels abroad to fulfill her fantasy of becoming a maid. Too bad her new master is a perverted sociopath.

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Comments ( 12 )

Really nicely tied all together! Great story ^^

There were three ways... Maybe four... I saw this could end.

This is probably the most deserved, though I wonder if the survivors are biting off more than they can chew....

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Ooooh, definitely curious to hear what the others could have been!

Anyway, I'm totally sure everything will be just fine. The only idiot here was Leap, and, well, if there's one thing that was clearly demonstrated, it's that Gerrick can chew a lot.

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1: Exactly what happened.
2: Leap did in the real Mirror.
3: Happy Ending as Gerrick finds his enthusiastic little snuff partner an amusing addition to his longer-term harem. Basically what he is d totempt her here.
4: Somehow, for some reason, Mirror decides to save Leap by offing Gerrick when he turns on her. This is the "eh, I suppose it MIGHT happen..." The most unlike!y one.

62: It was all a warped and twisted fantasy Leap was writing for a Creative Writing class that was about to get her expelld and shippedoff to be a REAL maid for a mysterious griffon patron....

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There's actually some hints in the fic that Leap has already killed "original" Mirrors several times. It's not explicitly explained really, but the "original" Mirror is just the one Mirror that has the ability to make copies. Copies can't make more copies, but aside from that ability and whatever memories they get after creation they're all completely identical. If the "original" dies then one of the copies inherits the talent at random and then becomes the new "original," and although "originals" to tend to live longer, Gerrick will usually cull them every now and then just so they don't get uppity. A spare Mirror is also kept in the basement just as insurance in case he's feeling particularly horny.

And as far as the duo biting off more than they can chew with their Equestrian tour, I expect some diplomatic immunity, subtlety, and a dash of porn-protagonist plot armor should do the trick—though many Mirrors will probably die along the way.

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Glad you enjoyed it! It was a blast to write.

This was really great. Hope to see a sequel one day.

God damn that was great. Really well-written, which is always a bonus. Ah, leap. God dammit, you are denser than lead. :p

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I mean, it's right there in her name, really. If she could stick the damned landing they wouldn't have shipped her off to Snuffyville.

Damn killed the night after I said she might have a career here though I get his reasoning never liked others stealing my kills lol

Well not bad I enjoyed it more than I expected.

This was so fantastic. Just long enough to build up the finale, making it all so satisfying in the end. Excellent job.

Gerrick straightened up, Leap’s heart still beating weakly in his mouth and spraying its last reservoirs of blood over its former owner’s corpse. He threw his head back, opening his beak wide, and swallowed it down with a satisfied sigh.

Well, he stole her heart... literally :rainbowlaugh:

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