Sidestory: Twi's killer
The bed was starting to tempt Twilight a lot. The thought of the soft madras and warm blanket folding around her while she slowly drifted off to sleep was the only thing on her mind at this moment. That however did not last long as a pink blur shot across her vision disturbing her daydream. She had completely zoned out during the movie she was watching with her friends. She figured she missed the ending due to the credits rolling over the screen.
She said goodbye to her friends and literary pushed them outside before closing the door with her magic. When Twilight wanted her sleep, no one was going to stop her. Of course every rule has its exception. This time the exception came in form of a dark blue alicorn. Wait, what would Luna want with her this late in the evening? Oh no where was her manners.
Twilight gave a short bow before asking. “What brings your presence to my humble library my princess?”
Luna let out a chuckle. “Twilight Sparkle, thou art our friend. Thou shall not feel need to be so formal around us.”
“I’m sorry princess, it’s kind of a habit. Do you want something to drink or eat? Also just feel free to take a seat wherever feels the more comfortable.” Twilight said a bit nervously.
“I’m afraid we’re not here only for a friendly visit. There is a little problem we need help with. Would you be able to do us a favor?”
“Sure, anything for a princess!” Twilight exlaimed
“Okay, we need thou to stand still.” Twilight looked confused but complied. Luna’s horn flicked for a second.
“Soundproof spell?” Twilight looked a bit worried now.
“Yes, what thou is about to hear is highly classified.” Now that Luna had Twilight’s full attention she could put her plan into movement. A fact known by few is that alicorns can cast some of the easier magic without causing their horn to glow. This is exactly why Twilight did not see what came next.
Luna levitated a ring made specifically to block the wearers magic flow onto Twilights horn. At the same time she tied her legs together with a magic rope.
“Wh-What are you doing?” Twilight stammered.
“Oh you silly mortals. Did thou really think the elements of harmony was going to cure us from ourselves? Nightmare Moon was never another personality, she was me all along. When thou used the elements of harmony all you did was knock our magic out for a day. We simply used that to gain Tia’s trust and make sure thou all thought we was a good princess again. Now all we have to do is get two of the most powerful magical ponies in Equestria out of the picture, and the night will last forever.”
“The elements of harmony and Celestia...” Realisation came upon Twilight. “How do you plan on killing Celestia? She’s even more powerfull than you!”
“We never said we would kill her. Thou are going to kill her.”
“WHAT?! I would never kill my mentor!” Twilight got a hoof to the face.
“YOU FOOL! Thou does not speak to a princess like that!” Luna replied in the royal canterlot voice. “Now thou will kill thy mentor and thou will feel good about it. It’s only fair that we explain the process for thou, after all we are going to kill you.” With that statement Luna gave Twilight an uppercut. A loud crack was to be heard.
“Our dear sister Celestia is in love with thy Twilight. She might not know it yet, but she is. Alicorns only love once, and if that love dissapears the alicorn will become mad. That is why we’re only tree alicorns left. All Tia need is a little nudge to realise that she loves thou.” The alicorn gave her a double buck in the side. Several bones cracked. Luna could not help but grin at the sight before her. Bloodied and bruised Twilight laid there. Luna guessed she had only a few minutes left.
Luna cast two spells on Twilight. The first was a minor mindcontroll spell. It told her to teleport to Celestia’s bedchambers and admit her “love” for her. The other was a strong want it need it spell. This combo should be more than enough to give Celestia thoughts nopony should have.
Now all Luna had to do was to wait. Oh how much fun this had been. Tomorow she would be the lone ruler of Equestria, and no one could stop her. There was a small pop of purple light and Twilight was gone.
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Meanwhile in sugarcube corner.
Spike had been helping Pinkie Pie out most of the evening baking a huge supply of cupcakes.
“Thank you for all the help Spike! I would never had been able to do it without you.” Pinkie exclaimed happily. She was about to charge in for a hug when her ears started flopping. It was followed by a twitchy tail, wobbling knees, itchy back and another twitchy tail. Her mane deflated and the huge grin that had just mounted her face dissapeared.
“Twilight’s dead.”
Anyways, feedback is always appriciated and I hope you enjoyed reading it :)
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>Moar detail to the story.
I personally enjoyed it. A small explanation and a nice cliffhanger that can be continued into a nice side story(?).
If I could, I'd give this another thumbs-up and fave.
The Pinkie Pie thing made me sad.
1162404 I guess I achieved my goal then :) I have no plans on writinng a sequel, but who knows might just happen some time :) Thanks for the feedback :D
1162411 Yeah, I realised that the side story lacked a bit sad so I added the Pinkie thing just for that. Glad it worked :)
Overall not bad for your first try.
Although Luna turning evil does kinda come out of left field
ummm how could Pinkie kno-,,,'gets hauled off in a black van'
1172276 You should know better than trying to understand Pinkiology xD
If you made a sequel I would read it, this was really good!
I got a really complete feeling from this. I should also add that I think the Pinkie Pie conclusion really added a sense of dread. It was like you were confirming what the reader already knew, that this story ended in Twilights death.
1178819 Thanks for the feedback! I'm not going to be writing a sequel to it due to the fact that I loose inspiration after about 1000 words. A sequel would require A LOT more xD Maybe someone else will some time? Who knows :)
1197934 D'awww I'm sorry :( Does it help that I'm working on a happy Twilestia ship? :)
1198297it helps a lot
but this story is still realy sad
thank you
1199844 I guess I achieved what I wanted then :)
Aaand my day's ruined.
1774957 I'm sorry for ruining your day?
1775006
Sorry won't do it! I want you to buy me lots of sugary things, stat! Candy, and lots of it!
1775008 I'm sick, can't go to the store :/ Anyways mind giving me a heads up on how I ruined your day?
1775192
Well, Celestia offing herself did. And the plot twist of NM still being around was surprising.
1775197 Guess this fic ain't for everyone, I did leave a pretty fair warning in description though. I myself can't stand reading fics like these, but I was in a bad state when I wrote it.
1775229
Ah. That explains it, then. I could never bring myself to write anything like that, though.
This is horrible. You just killed two of my favourite ponies using the third. Definitely NOT my thing. Almost as bad as Faithful.
1827623 It's not a fic for everybody indeed
this was an interesting strorie.
1775229
I wanted to ask whether I could write a one-shot based off this. Kind of a happy ending thing that I've had in my mind for a while.
2088226 I would be honored :)
2088551
A warning, though.
LunaNightmare Moon will be ded.2088564 I do have a thing for dark stories :)
2088598
That you do, my friend.
Why would luna do this. It hurts my feels to know this. Still great story keep writing
Well, that was dark. Poor Twi. Told she is loved by her mentor and then killed before she can act on it. One of the very few and rare times where I hate Luna.
i do not like this story
i refer only to the side story