Most of my MLP stories feature meetings of G1 and G4.
This story is a sequel to A Visit for Redemption
After what happened the last time she visited Equestria, Sunset Shimmer decided to try again. This time, it’s at the Crystal Empire. Hopefully, Princess Cadence will be much friendlier to her.
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Aww, thanks, I wasn't asking for a sequal, was just curious, so this was a nice surprise, uhm, it is marked incomplete though...
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I just fixed that. Thanks for the heads up.
This isn’t any better than the original. If you’re gonna write a story like this, MAKE IT MORE THAN 1200 WORDS
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Alternativly, YOU could simply not read the story?
Just a bit of advice in regards to your cover art. Pony bodies are more of a bean shape. I'd recommend starting with two circles next to each other and doing a bit of a dip to connect them.
I'm going to say it. This was bad. You had Sunset tied up again little fact. That kidnapping and against the law!
Forced to be brought to Candence who suffer no punishment for how she acted. And never apologized for what she did....
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It wasn't meant to be a kidnapping. Sunset was scared, thinking that Cadence was going to be thrown back through the mirror. So, the guards felt that it was necessary to have her restrained so she doesn't hurt herself.
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...............That kidnapping.
If high school-level art class was taken for a passing grade instead of an elective; you'd fail in a heartbeat for all these cover art drawings that you'd expect from a four-year old
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