Once a Bandle gunner, always a Bandle gunner.
When Octavia is viciously attacked on her way home, she learns that the friendship of a certain pink pony will be a key component in her recovery process, both from her attacker, and her own solitude. However, the gift of happiness often comes with a price.
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A bitter-sweet reminder that even in a land of peaceful candy-colored ponies, bad things can still happen. Good thing it doesn't stay that waydl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Octavia2.png
A pretty good story, although I feel it's a tad short.
There was a few spelling mistakes with the most glaring one being:
"I reached down and carefully placed my bag on my bag." Actually made me giggle a bit lol
All in all, I liked it and I would like to see more from you.
I dig your characterization of Octavia, but was very surprised to see it end there. I'm definitely left wanting more!
Awesome. want MOAR
Really well put-together story! I really can't wait to see where you'll take this concept.
An Octavia story that doesn't have Vinyl in it? Ok then let's take a look.... Good start, excellent foundation for the story. It will be interesting to see where this is heading.