Rainbow Dash has her eyes set on one goal, to be counted amongst her esteemed heroes, the Wonderbolts. Despite years of training, and hard work to display her talents in front of her idols, they have yet to so much as mention the possibility of her joining. Determined to solidify her presence in their minds, she participates in the annual Cloudsdale Arial Acrobatics Competition and puts her wings and her reputation on the line in order to gain their praise, only to find that the answers to your problems can be closer than they appear.
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Yay, first comment!
Great story! It seems that that's all Dash ever had to do, despite all her hard efforts. It made me laugh.
Like it it was a good fic and i look forward to future fics
Let this be a lesson to everypony. Some times one just needs to take matters into their own hooves to be successful!
Great story!
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The lesson to be learned: Ask questions.
This is definitely a great one-shot.
Keep up the writing, good sir!
Now this is an interesting take on getting Dash in the Wonderbolts. I really enjoy it, actually, it's different enough to be quite entertaining to think about. :)
It was such a simple but well worked premise. I liked it.
There were a few spelling and some grammatical errors here and there but nothing too serious. It was still perfectly readable that it gets the message across no problem.
All it takes is one simple and easy thing to do
