Kratus' Logs

by Edguy0009

Equestria Part 8 Peace, Reconstruction, New Official Sport, Passing of The Torch.

E 260 EQS

3,011,080 yrs 1 mo, 4 dy AGC

The terms of surrender were accepted which were rather generous compared to the ones I’ve read about from my old home, Twilight Sparkle and her friends are doing rather well and do her past achievements Celestia and Luna have decided to hand over the Equestria to Twilight Sparkle and her friends all of whom will be excellent leaders of course the coronation won’t happen until after reconstruction is complete giving her plenty of time to prepare, I and the MAA leadership (mainly the Turaga) have offered to give advice should she and her friends ask for it, the ponies have taken well to Kohlii and as a result a cultural exchange program has been set up because of it and Twilight Sparkle and the MAA Leadership, I can imagine that there will be Kohlii competitions between the MAA and Equestria in the future.

E 300 EQS

3,011,088 yrs 3 mos AGC

The completion of the reconstruction efforts happened two months ago thanks to the efforts of ponies, the MAA and the help of the Bohrok, the date of Twilight’s coronation will take place in a year to which I, the MAA leadership Tahu, his team, and Mata Nui and his companions have been invited*, Kohlii has been taken so well by the ponies including Luna and Celestia that it became an official sport and there're several stadiums that are undergoing design and construction.

E 405 EQS

3,011,089 yrs 8 mos 1 dy AGC

Twilight’s Coronation went well despite some mishaps which to make up for them the First Official Kohlii Match between Equestria and the MAA got arranged to take place in two months to the day of the coronation which Pohatu the Star Patron of Kohlii will attend as well, Fluttershy got along well Click and have taken a liking to each other, Mata Nui, Ackar, Kiina and Gresh have gotten along well with Twilight and her friends, I of course will visit Celestia and Luna in their retirement and after so many years I’ve decided to reveal my full past to them, I will tell Twilight and her friends about it as well at a later date.

E 420 EQS
3,011,089 yrs 10 mos 2 dy AGC

The First Official Kohlii Match between Equestria and the MAA taking place to honor Twilight Sparkle whom as one of the guests of honor (with Pohatu being the other) attended took place yesterday with the former princesses in attendance and Twilight’s friends, despite them being relatively new to the sport Equestria was victorious it was beginners luck I suppose, I foresee a long, prosperous future ahead for all of Equestria and good relationships between the MAA and Equestria.

E 420
3,011,089 yrs 3 mos 9 dy AGC

Yesterday the ponies, much to my surprise, discovered a friend I thought long dead in the San Palomino Desert, a Rahi called a Nui-Jaga. The reason for my surprise is that during the Great Crisis, the cavern where she was in a container to heal a scar on her shell collapsed with me believing her dead and.... *Thudding sound and chittering noises*.

"Easy girl, nice to see you too."

Author's Note:

Final Supplementary Note:
*Which were accepted as it marked the beginning of a new era of peace and unity, at least in this part of the areas under my watch.

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Yes I decided to add the first and last parts of Season Nine

Comments

[EverfreePony]

I have to say, I'm not familiar with the other sourse material this is crossovered with, so it's likely that I missed out on a bunch of references and the like, but I don't think this is a bad story--in fact, I've seen far worse. The only recurring issue that I see here is that each of the entries is one long, run-on sentence. Splitting it into a bunch of shorter, standalone sentences would make reading this far smoother. Plus there were some doubled words and other occasional rough wording, but it wasn't really common. All of this makes me wonder why was this story downvoted as much as you claim as it really isn't that bad. Oh, on a side note, you might want to consider including the supplementary notes directly below the individual entries. While the chapters are short, it's still rather hard to navigate this way.

[Edguy0009]

10483078
Will improve when I move into a new house.

[EverfreePony]

10486974
Sure, no rush I just hope it’s gonna help a little.

[Edguy0009]

10487610
Though I am working on a chapterized version of it, which is going slow.

[EverfreePony]

10496455
Chapterised version? How should I imagine that?

[Edguy0009]

10496909

It's a third person view.

[EverfreePony]

10497398
Ah, I see. Cool.