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I thought you said weast...


This story is a sequel to Sweet and Delicate

Redux (more of an overhaul) because I feel like I can improve it more.

Reading Sweet & Delicate is recommended but not required.

Quiet. Alone. Invisible. A loser. A punching bag for bullies. Just a few things Coppermane would say to describe himself. He would give anything to overcome his social anxiety and have just one friend. But it seems like no matter what he does, he always ends up falling back where he started.

But one day, after he's rescued from yet another jumping, he might get everything he wished for, in the form of a beautiful girl with silky pink hair and starlight teal eyes. And he might give her what she's been wanting as well.

Coppermane & Fluttershy Series: 2.0

Cover art by SoulAkai41

Chapters (4)
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Comments ( 21 )

Wow! This is a good rewrite! Keep it going, bro!

Off to a good start! Keep it up ole buddy!:twilightsmile:

PewDiePie makes a better YouTube Rewind 2019!

I get my first Reddit Post to go viral!

And now....a rewrite.... of an amazing story!?


I'm liking this so far! Keep up the good work! :twilightsmile:

I'm lovin the rewrites. But I have to ask when is there gonna be a new piece to the series?

This is great so far! Can't wait to read more of this!

Oh so Copper does have family, that's good. :twilightsmile:

Good to see that Copper has parents. I was wondering where they were in the first version.

Nicely done! Also, I'm so glad that Copper's got parents!

thank you so much for making this a thing.

I know this is your story, but I do have one thing I'd like to say. I don't think the Coppermane's parents really have a place in these stories. For one thing, they really take away from his tragic backstory. In the original, Coppermane was totally alone, and it really made his life seem absolutely horrible, and his being completely broken actually understandable. By giving him parents, that are caring, no less, he seems far less tragic and than he should. For another thing, none of your other Coppershy stories (not counting Loveliest of Trees) have any room for his parents. So, unless you plan on redoing all your other stories to allow for his parents, I'd think twice before making them actual characters in this story. Just my two cents, bro. You do you. I'll support you, whatever you decide.

Oooh, interesting development... Tis very interesting, indeed...

Now things are really heating up! Can't wait to read more of this!

This is a lot different from the original story. I really like the direction it's going so far, it feels more grounded in reality while staying true to the original characters. Looking forward to future updates.

I wonder what will his parents think about fluttershy 🤩

Thanks for return back and make forgotten love a great or good story


I'm so glad to see this story back in action! Can't wait to see where it goes next!

"Oh gosh... why am I so nervous?” Fluttershy said.

Me: fluttershy he likes you I’m pretty sure he likes you back I can tell

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