Very first fanfic I ever wrote.
Coppermane, an introverted & insecure student of Princess Celestia, is asked by his teacher to perform at the Summer Sun Celebration in Ponyville after hearing him sing. He's been bullied for most of his life, and is scared of being in a new town. New faces to hate him, right? That is, until he meets a familiar cast of ponies who will prove his assumptions wrong. And among this familiar cast is the most beautiful mare Coppermane has ever seen in his life.
Coppermane & Fluttershy Series: 1.0
Chapters (21)
'leans back in chair' you've got my attention.
From what?
Dun, Dun ,Dun!!
lol, but no really I did see a few mistakes here and there but nothing worth fretting over
Can't wait for next chapter!
i can't wait to read more!!
I love the story and I am loving how much chapters you are writing in such a short time!! Keep it up!!
:D and thus starts the meddling of Applejack and Co.
I could only imagine the awkwardness of fluttershy's and coppermane's conversation.
:D :D :D :D PLOT ADVANCEMENT AND CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT!! but one question, where did you get the name catharsis?
XD the incredibly difficult situation of knowing 2 people like each other but not being able to see it in the other. (you know what it is.)
I noticed in some of the chapters some words re randomly bolded, Why, I may ask.
And you might want to add some backstory on the grove, it might make for some more interesting character development.
I also like how you switch between copper's and fluttershy's POV to see how similarly they think and feel.
And not that I am complaining, but you put a song about cars in a story that doesn't (shouldn't) have cars.
*tries to contain, putting it off as pinkie being pinkie
*Rofl-ing uncontrollably*
I really liked how all that played out. Very funny in a so-far fairly-serious fanfic.
A couple of things,
THE FEEEELLLLSS!!
1.
2. Aren't cherry blossoms tree flowers? how are the stems long enough to make a necklace?
3. I don't know if I said it about this story yet, But timing is a beach.
This is an interesting concept, the whole clone and music thing. I'm surprised this story has so many dislikes...sure, the story is a little stilted and awkward, but over 70 percent of stories on this site are like that! Here, have an upvote!
6825798 lol, thanks for the support! I had this stroke of inspiration one day, and I decided, 'hey, what's the worst that could happen?', right?
Alright, you've intrigued me
6826225 lol, glad to hear that. Hope you enjoy
6826074 No problem.
:D o love it!! The whole link of the universe, they think about each other, and do everything in such a similar fashion., they they are linked on a much deeper level than emotional or physical connection can ever show.
I can't wait to read the beautiful reunion of those two. . . There will be tears.
Oh man can't wait for more!
OH I LOVED IT!! A little cliche, the stallion caring for the sick mare, or vise versa, but still warming to read. And I think it it is funny, rarity having those flowers. Cause you know, who doesn't have immortal flowers lying around? But seriously, I love it.
Alrighty, I'm a fan
My reaction to the 'almost' kiss scene...
OH FOR PETE SAKE!!!
I would have loved it if they did work up the courage but couldn't say anything because whenever they tried, the conductor would blow the whistle.
"Oh for pete sake!!!" Rainbow yelled as she took the whistle and bucked it all the way to tartarus.
THAT IS MEAN MISTER/MISS!! YOU KNOW WHAT WE WANTED TO SEE AND YOU MAKE US WAIT UNTIL TOMORROW!! (oof, such fluff, much feels.)
6830530 lol, I know, that's why I did it
Don't worry, I won't make you wait till tomorrow. I'm going to upload it after I'm don't with my last class for the day, which is in about an hour.
And it's mister, for the record
I DID I DID I DID!!!!
(and uhg, more cliffhangers. . .)
FINALLY!!!!!
These are the stories I rarely see, mostly fluff without much conflict. I love them so much, but are very uncommon.
OOOOOH, I can't wait to see what the sequal holds!!
The mary sue is real with this one.
Woohoo!
I like this story. O.C.s arnt my cup of tea, but copper is enjoyable. So much so, he now has a place on "The Shipself". Well done.
This pleases elbodago, he shall continue reading
I agree with "mtf0330". More POV = deeper story.
I do love copper. He is cannon to me now. along with: snow drop, fluffle puff, and darky mic badpony. Good work Nordryd.
I'm ready for more lol
I love this oc
All I thought was "You're an asshole Applejack"
7009246 lol. Sorry. She had to figure it out somehow, right? Hope you're enjoying it despite that. Hope you'll continue to the end.
I'm probably more excited to read the other 40 some chapters of this than Doom 4 lol
6829880 yeah me and you both brother lol
Why is Applejack such a dick in this fic lol
6824635 sewed them together I suppose
Finally, I'm crying at something
On to the next one
I know I should have said before, but I'll say it now. YEAH FINALLY WOOHOO!
6829880 I just think about that scene with Sweetie Belle in Hearts and Hooves Day
-Dark
Pick a tense and stick with it. Reread this story and make some major grammar edits.
This is a pretty ok story that can be greater if the right amount of time is put into it, even after its compeletion.
7148267 I'm currently rewriting the sequel to this story, and rewriting this story is definitely on my list. This is the first story I ever wrote, and yeah, the infancy of my writing career really shows. This is going to take some drastic time to rewrite, so I'm putting this off until final exams are over.
Thanks for your feedback, though