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This story is a sequel to ULTRA LIVE! Sunset Shimmer


After bringing down Anon-A-Miss and defeating the alien duo Icarus and Metron two months ago; Sunset, Ultraman Ginga, and their friends have settled into a time of peace, with only the occasional giant monster attack. However, dark forces are looming on the horizon as Sunset's former demon, Fall, the cold emotionless Alien Baltan, and the entire rogues gallery of Equestria are now after her.

Fortunately, this time, Twilight Sparkle will be joining the gang, and she's brought some new tricks.

Oh well. Guess it's back to the grindstone.

ULTRA LIVE! ULTRAMAN GINGA!


Additional character tags:

Starlight Glimmer
The Dazzlings
King Sombra
Storm King
Tempest Shadow
Trixie
Lightning Dust

Chapters (7)
Comments ( 32 )

Oh God! The Sequel is here!

The sequel is here YAY!

Twilight need a break from the her home

DARK LIVE!

CAMEARRA!

HUDRA!

DARRAMB!

ULTRA LIVE! ULTRAMAN TIGA!

Dark/Ultra Live! Evil Tiga!

Ow heck yeah let’s see what sunnys got this time

The Gang watched as Ginga and Adarra flew into outer space. Pinkie Pie decided to use this chance to strike a pose. She raised both her arms, fists clenched, and yelled out loudly.

“UCHU KITTTTAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!”

Pinkie, that's not from Ultraman franchise. That's from Kamen Rider

I just saw this when I came on to this site a while ago and I was like, awesome! It's the sequal! I'm glad to see you up and running again and I hope you are doing well. Man I honestly hope Sunset can win against the Dazzlings in a 3 on 1 fight unless Wallflower and Rainbow can make it back somehow to aid her in the fight! Plus I honestly wish that damn oversized cockroach Baltan was wasted by Sunset but there will always be another time I guess.

Also it looks like Sonata just found out that she was tricked into a suicide mission but Adagio doesn't care and all I can say is god she is a fucking idiot! Does she honestly think her life isn't worth anything after what happen? She and Aria are just pathetic. Hopefully Sonata becomes one of the good guys after this.

Plus I can't help but feel bad for Princess Twilight as she is under so much stress that it reminds me of what she went through in the MLP Movie. Her friends were not a lot of help in that movie and Queen Novo was a cowardly inconsiderate bitch! Sorry I hate Novo as I have no respect for someone like her. But the worst thing is Twilight feels like she is useless in coming to the human world and feels there isn't anything she can do to help. Man I hope she will be able to contribute somehow.

This is getting really good and I hope to see more soon.

Good Luck Cojo5536.

I just finished reading this chapter and it kicked ass! Man that was just intense and it was funny to with the way the Dazzlings were acting. LOL! Especially the banter between Aria and Sonata while Adagio looked on dumbfounded. I'm glad Sunset and Ginga were both able to win against the Dazzlings but what happen to Adagio was just crazy.

It looks like the geodes gave her a power up but at a price and I'm starting to have a bad feeling on who Dark Lugiel is but I hope I'm wrong and it is someone else. But I like the new power up that Sunset gotten with Twilight and the others help. It sucks with what happen to Lightning Dash though and I hope there is a way for her to recover and be an athlete again. Maybe Sunset can gain some healing powers to use in future chapters.

Also I like how Taro explained why he couldn't share technologhy with ponykind considering how they act. Another thing about this chapter is I'm starting to think Twilight is losing trust in Princess Celestia after what they talked about and she feels like Celestia is manipulating her, making her wonder if she even cares about her? That's just me though.

I know one thing for sure is that the Dazzlings won't ever trust Fall or her group ever again after what happen. Plus I hope they get the chance to tell the Ginga gang what they know and Fall doesn't go after them. This is getting good and I hope to see more soon.

Good Luck Cojo5536.

“Sonata, do something!” Aria snapped angrily. “We’re getting our butts kicked here?”

You need to correct this. The "?" change to "!"

The end of this chapter amused me.

I just read the newest chapter and it kicked ass! I will admit it didn't have as much fighting as the last chapter it was still enjoyable. I'm glad Sunset was able to help Tempest out and hopefully she joins the Ginga gang to help against Lugiel and his douchebag minions. Though something tells me that the next chapter will have me worried because of what Fall said and I couldn't help but laugh at what she said to Balton.

Fall suddenly felt something hit her hand, followed by dampness. Another droplet landed on her head followed by a distant roll of thunder, drawing her eyes to the darkening clouds in the sky.

“It’s a sign,” Fall whispered, “It’s a sign! HAHAHA! Someone up there is looking out for me today!”

Baltan tilted its head and looked up to the sky.

“Not literally, you dumbass!” Fall growled to her cohort, “Come on, I know exactly who to bring in next.”

Baltan watched as Fall began walking away, took a last look at the sky, shrugged, then teleported the pair.

I have a feeling that Starlight Glimmer is Sunset's next apponent and I REALLY hope she get's her ass handed to her. I really hate her as her whole reason for being evil and enslaving pony's the way she did was the stupidest reason ever! She blammed cutie marks for her troubles and what she did in the original series was just plain out stupid, and childish. She did all that just because her best friend moved away? Seriously she could have wrote to him or tried to find him or when she got her cutie mark she could have tried going into the same school as him! Her whole redemption was absolute bullshit as well. Sorry I just feel that she got off too easily in the series.

But back to the topic at hand. I hope that Pinkie won't go overboard and learn to give space to Tempest when she needs it. Which brings a question to mind. Will Tempest tell Sunset and the others about the other villains that she was with and where they work? Also I'm wondering if she saw who Lugiel was? If so I hope it can help trace down where he is so they can capture that prick. Before I forget I couldn't help laugh at how Rarity acted toward Apple Jack and Rainbow Dash. LOL!

This is getting good and I hope to see more soon.

Good Luck Cojo5536.

I really enjoyed your first story and look forward to seeing more here. Keep up the awesome work!

I just saw this and read the newest chapter! This was amazing! I'm glad to see this is still going as I was worried there hasn't been an update in a while but I'm glad to see you back. So the Storm King is dead? Well it surves the bastard right especially after he killed those pilots who came in to help Ginga and Sunset during the fight they had. Poor Sunset is going to be going through some serious issues because of this but hopefully her friends will help her out.

And Tempest made a point in this chapter about the soldiers who gave their lives to help Sunset fighting the Storm King. They knew the risk's in coming in to help Ultraman Ginga and did so willingly to help save the lives of millions and those they care about. I hope Sunset uses this as a drive to do better and make sure no one ever dies again.

I also enjoyed the interaction between Tempest and the others. Speaking of which it looks like my guess was right on who Dark Lugiel is when Tempest saw Princess Twilight. Honestly I was expecting someone else.

As for the Storm King it was pathetic he didn't do more to stay in shape and as for this spark doll Doragory. I'm wondering who took it? Who ever has it could only spell trouble for everyone. This is gettin good and I hope to see more soon.

Good Luck Cojo5536.

I just read the newest chapter right now and I was surprised at what I read. This was unexpected for what Twilight or rather Sci-Twi did during this chapter. But after reading about her new confidence I have a good idea on why she is like this. I'm now worried about the Friendship Games that will eventually happen and what it could mean.

So she has no idea that she is being controlled by Dark Lugiel? I don't have anything else to add to this but I hope to see the next chapter soon and wonder who will Sunset face off against next. Plus were are the Dazzlings? Did they leave Canterlot or are they in hidding? Also will we hear from Timber Sprunce again? Hope to see the next chapter again soon and I seriously hate the Shadowbolts.

Good Luck Cojo5536.

Welp. We just found out who's the host.

However, recently, she felt odd. She had been having frequent blackouts on numerous occasions. She also lost time whenever she had those blackouts. However, she kept such things to herself, not wanting to worry the people who cared about her.

:rainbowhuh:

she is Dark Lugiel!!!!!!!!!!!!! :pinkiegasp:

OK, I'll admit it. This plot twist is one I definitely didn't see coming.

Realizing the mood he had created, Taro asked, “Do you want to hear about the Choju Yapool hid in a child’s bedwetting stain?”

They actually did that?!:pinkiesick:

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:rainbowderp: I have no words to describe how sick and twisted that is.

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Say, what did you think of what I did with Adagio, and by extension the Siren species? That was what I was most worried about.

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What you did with their species was really interesting. And if this were Canon, it would explain a lot.

I want to say sorry for not reviewing this when it came out as life has been difficult and tiresome. But I'm hanging in there. Anyway on to my review.

Tempest Shadow has now decided to return to Equestria as the new leader to the Storm Kings kingdom and hopefully things will turn out better for her. I wish someone told her not to jump threw the mirrior. After that Sunset gets a call from the hospital to know that Lightning Dust is okay but Adagio wants to see her.

We then cut to the scene between Fall and Queen Chrysalis. Chrysalis got owned in this part trying to punch Fall before getting thrown into the wall. Fall then laid out the facts for her and even I have to admit Celestia was an idiot not to see the difference. After that we see Chrysalis getting captured by an unknown force.

Soon we cut back to the hospital scene with Sunset trying to talk to Adagio and Rainbow talking with Lighting Dust. Honestly I hope Lightning is able to play sports again. Maybe if there is a way Sunset and Ginga can try to heal her using the Ginga Spark with Equestrian Magic so she can be completly healed.

Then the fake Ultraman Ginga comes and Sunset was hesitant in wanting to fight whoever it was. Fall saw what was going on and had Baltan go in to destroy the fake Ultraman. Then we get Yapool and I seriously hate this guy already after what he did. Seriously is there anyway to perminately kill this asshole and assure he never comes back? Maybe time travel to make sure he never exsisted.

There there was this scene.

“Wow. Those sound way less scary than the ones we have,” Pinkie said, earning a flinch from Sunset.

Oh crap!” Sunset thought, “Uh, Pinkie? I don’t think that particular story is very appropriate for Twilight.”

“TELL ME!” Twilight cried having gotten a notebook and pencil from… somewhere.

“Nonononono! Really Twilight! If you think Pony myths can be a bit messed up, humans can come up with so much worse!” Sunset pleaded.

“Be that as it may, Sunset, I must press on. If I don’t, how could I bear to call myself a scientist. Now, please continue, Pinkie.”

“Oh, they’re just forest-dwelling, man-eating monsters that can do stuff like imitate your friends’ voices, mess with time, and reorganize the woods to keep you lost,” Pinkie explained.

“... Well that’s not too bad-”

“Oh! And they’re created when someone lost in the woods resorts to cannibalism,” she finished.

Twilight dry heave and cried, “WHAT IS WRONG WITH YOU PEOPLE!? WHY WOULD YOU EVER COME UP WITH SOMETHING LIKE THAT!?”

“I warned you,” Sunset hissed as everyone laughed at their bookish friend’s disgust.

:facehoof: Pinkie you just had to open your big mouth like always didn't you?

I almost forgot something concerning the Dazzlings. I noticed in almost every story I read on this site Adagio and the others were considered a thousand years old and lived for that long on Earth but this is a surprise seeing they are still teenagers. Didn't expect that. Plus I have to agree that this part was gross.

Realizing the mood he had created, Taro asked, “Do you want to hear about the Choju Yapool hid in a child’s bedwetting stain?”

“What the f-!?” Came the unified cry.

That's what I'm saying and even looked it up on the link to this monster on this site and what I read made me sick. Before I forget there were a few miss spelled words while I was reading this again.

This is getting good and I hope to see another chapter soon.

Good Luck Cojo5536.

I decided to read this again and man this is getting crazy. Sorry I didn't review this sooner when it came out. I did notice a few miss spelled words but it's fine as you can fix them later. If you want I can look through this as I scanned through this chapter again. Anyway there are a lot of things to talk about in this chapter so I will start with this subject first.

First and formost I'm shocked to see that the human Shinging Armor is MARRIED to the human Chrysalis. :rainbowderp: I didn't expect that as I figured it was the same way like in Equestria but I was wrong. Another I noticed is that Sci-Twi and Shinging's father is a complete asshole in this world unlike his counterpart in Equestria. What happen to their mother? Did she die or did they devorise? Plus Chrsalis did raise a valid point to her husband about how those bitches at Crystal Prep are treating Sci-Twi and it's a miracle she hasn't tooken his gun and started shooting up the place.

Then we get to the part were Sunny Starscout and Hitch Trailblazer show up uninvited and I am already not liking them one bit as I wanted to punch these two in the face. What's worst is Shining is getting forced into this crap with SMILE and I want to know who the hell are these guys?

We then get to Princess Twilight and Taro having a conversation about Queen Chrysalis and her deal with Yapool. Also I have to agree with Taro about Queen Chrysalis being an incompetent, impatient, lazy idiot. I still can't understand why Celestia continued on with the wedding though as it shouldn't have happen but then I read that there might have been Changelings living among Canterlot and no one knew. Another thing I agree with Taro is that they have to stop with the ignorance toward the two species as they need to work together to save both worlds.

I now understand why Fall wants Sunset's body as she won't last long if this keeps up and it looks like trouble will be coming again soon as I looked up the spark doll King Sombra suggested. Who is going to use it though or who will they trick to use it?

Then there was the meeting between Luna and Pharynx. I can tell that there is still some hostility between the two races but they will need to put it aside. And Luna is right on what she said toward Celestia in that they need the Ultra's again to save not only Equestria but the human world too.

This is getting good and I hope to see more soon.

Good Luck Cojo5536.

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Since you took the time out of your day to leave this lovely analysis, I wanted to explain my reasoning for my choices in this chapter.

First and formost I'm shocked to see that the human Shinging Armor is MARRIED to the human Chrysalis. :rainbowderp: I didn't expect that as I figured it was the same way like in Equestria but I was wrong.

Why is the human Shining Armor married to Chrysalis? My reasoning was severalfold. The first was more of a personal gripe. I don't find dating the brother of the little girl you're supposed to be babysitting to be in bad form because if anything goes wrong, you could find yourself and the brother being blamed for being distracted with each other.

Second, misery loves company. Do you honestly think a miserable old bitch like Cinch would allow the younger hotter Cadance to be more successful in anything, especially her love life?

The big one, however, was that the human world of Equestria Girls is not Equestria, and therefore, shouldn't be one to one. What is the point of having the human world if it's going to in essence just be Equestria again? This also influenced my decision to rename the human Chrysalis as without the Changelings or the evil, there's not much point in a "Queen Chrysalis". Perhaps it's a facetious nickname her colleagues gave her.

Another I noticed is that Sci-Twi and Shinging's father is a complete asshole in this world unlike his counterpart in Equestria. What happen to their mother? Did she die or did they devorise?

It never sat well with me that Shining Armor would let Twilight be bullied the way she was in Friendship Games so it stands to reason that he was either being leveraged or he's abusively neglectful. Again, this ties back to my point about the human world not being Equestria, in one world, Twilight's dad is a loving family stallion, the other, a controlling tyrant.

Plus Chrsalis did raise a valid point to her husband about how those bitches at Crystal Prep are treating Sci-Twi and it's a miracle she hasn't tooken his gun and started shooting up the place.

I'll put my hands up here and say that bit was based on a gripe I have around the subject of mass shootings. Behind every gun used in one of these horrific events, there must be a person, and rather than ask why someone would do such an awful crime, the discussion always comes down to the guns themselves. A gun is functionally no different from a hammer or a knife. Yes the gun was specifically designed as a weapon, but like the hammer or knife, without a shooter, all the gun can do is sit there. Chrysanthemum's point is that Shining's inaction is further undeserved stress on Twilight that could drive her to find her own solution to the problem.

Then we get to the part were Sunny Starscout and Hitch Trailblazer show up uninvited and I am already not liking them one bit as I wanted to punch these two in the face. What's worst is Shining is getting forced into this crap with SMILE and I want to know who the hell are these guys?

You'll have to wait and see for those answers ;D.

There's nothing else to really say as the rest of your review is everything else is stuff I don't need to comment on. I will say (semi-seriously) though, I don't want to hear about misspellings from someone who gives my Grammarly an aneurysm with all the errors. Please look into Grammarly for your spellchecking needs.

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There's nothing else to really say as the rest of your review is everything else is stuff I don't need to comment on. I will say (semi-seriously) though, I don't want to hear about misspellings from someone who gives my Grammarly an aneurysm with all the errors. Please look into Grammarly for your spellchecking needs.

I wasn't trying to be mean.

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Oh, I know, I wasn't either, hence the semi-seriously there. Humorous ribbing in a text format is really hard for me, so I'm sorry.

Outside of that, what do you think of the rest of my explanations?

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I like as it you pointed out a lot of valid reasons toward the human world and Equestria. It would make sense on why things are different in the human world and why Shinging Armor and Cadence aren't a couple. Also Sci-Twi's father being an asshole instead of being like his counterpart does make sense as this is a parrell universe were things may look the same but are opposite.

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Yeah, I'm just that damn slow.

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Ok. No worries, take your time. I too know the struggle of slow writing.

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