Shining Armor and Cadance attend a Nightmare Night party in Canterlot, where they reconnect with Twilight Sparkle.
Written for the "Spoopy October Incest Contest!" for "Incest is Wincest."
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Wolftamer54
Tamer of wolves, purveyor of horse smut and ShiningSparkle shipper. I did write something eventually, even if it's not much.
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That was light, funny and exciting. I approve!
9921193
Thank you!
I'd say it's weird that Cadance dressed up as her kidnapper and tormentor, but the show never really paired the two after season 2 so it's hard to tell if this out of character or not.
9923042
The idea is that she’s doing it to make Shining Armor feel better. Also, this has different post season 2 events, as seen in my previous story.
I loved the setup for the celebration and interactions between Cadance and Shining.
Shining and Twilight could use a bit more work, however. Their dialogue seemed not entirely natural.
I can easily imagine this story having a wonderful sequel.
9947840
Thanks. I realize that I haven’t been able to do the best dialogue, and will do my best to improve in the future. As for a sequel, I’m not sure when it will be or what it will be about, still haven’t really figured out which story I want to do for which characters next.
His turnaround felt very abrupt, even if you gave it multiple paragraphs.
10462297
Ok. Thanks for the feedback. And thank you for reading.
9923042
More than two years later, and I did decide to change Cadance's costume.
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As long no goal is born its perfectly fine as long there carefull ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
The only thing that can go wrong is what needs 11 Months to grow inside a mare
Great story
10779915
Huh... That explains the conflicting comment.
10841279
Thanks. Glad you liked the story. I'll edit some of those typos soon.
Why was the flow so fast? It all felt a bit “20yd dash,” on Strawberry Bang
10888115
Yeah, I know. That’s probably the biggest thing I regret about the story. I think the main reason is because I rushed to try and get it out for a contest, and didn’t give it as much time as I should have. But thank you for the feedback though, and thank you for reading.
10888258
Thank you for answering
10888736
No problem. I always love to hear what people think of my stories.