Forgiveness

Co-Authored by my Beta: DragWiz91
Cadence is used to helping ponies with romance problems. So when she finds out that Discord and Celestia's past is basically an ancient love tragedy, she goes out of her way to give them a happy ending, or a new beginning at the least.

Unfortunately, or fortunately, this is the Alicorn of the Day and the Lord of Chaos. She probably should have realized they'd prank her for putting them in a pocket-dimension.

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Vibrant lies

Vibrant lies #1 · Sep 17th, 2016 · · ·

You spelt unused as unuse in the summary.

Cross Lament

Cross Lament #2 · Sep 18th, 2016 · 1 · ·

Odds are Discord will be the one ending up pregnant.

Phoenix Nebula

Phoenix Nebula #3 · Sep 18th, 2016 · · ·

wut?

AkumaKami64

AkumaKami64 #4 · Sep 18th, 2016 · · ·

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What?

Phoenix Nebula

Phoenix Nebula #5 · Sep 18th, 2016 · · ·

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Sorry the end was a bit brambly and hard to understand. Still I liked this story and would be nice to see a sequel!

AkumaKami64

AkumaKami64 #6 · Sep 18th, 2016 · · ·

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Brambly? What exactly was hard to understand?

Glad you liked it though, and I might throw in an epilogue or something one day.

Phoenix Nebula

Phoenix Nebula #7 · Sep 18th, 2016 · · ·

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I meant rambly.

Julian the Dreamer

Julian the Dreamer #8 · Sep 18th, 2016 · 1 · ·

You know, you drime me crazy by writing these amazing Discord stories that I can't help but really like and then starting new ones instead of updating. Then again, I do the same with every fanfic I write...

That aside, I love this story. Oh, and Discord's prank/gift was just perfect. Now I can't help but imagine FLurry Heart finding about that when she's older.

Marina

Marina #9 · Sep 24th, 2016 · 1 · ·

EEEEEE!!!! THAT WAS SOOOO GOOD! I haven't read such a good story in a while, it's so underrated, I really think it needs more appreciation, the ideas, the writing, vwala! Thank You So Much!