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Griffonheart2012


Just a guy who likes magical equines

Comments ( 7 )

A bit messy, enough to the extent that I didn’t feel comfortable giving this a Thumps Up. You might want to seek out a few proofreaders/editors until you think you’re back in the swing of things.

But overall, not bad!

9878410
Thank you. I'll just be glad someone liked it.

Thanks for sending me this. Not bad. I just updated mine

Though Spike is missing here? There a reason for that?

9895473
....... GAH! I just realized I forgot Spike! (Headesk) Well I'd say at this point (considering Equestria's sun has become a red giant) he's probably passed on as well.

A good short story. Not perfect but very heartwarming and satisfying. Although personally I really hope that Twilight doesn’t have to go through all that pain and loneliness.

10080290
I kinda wanted to show that even if Twilight does live for a long time even she had a light at the end of the tunnel.

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