Some of you may know that I wrote a story titled OC is Magic. Due to Relationship issues and my lack of inexperience with writing; it came out less than stellar. So this is a rewrite, and plot change!
Cloud and his sister Rhapsody have bought a house in Ponyville! Cloud is a member of the Equestrian Borough of Investigation, the EBI, and needed a place to stay. Since its not a great salary, he went to his sister Rhapsody, a baker who loves her brother to death, and the two bought a house together.
What forms of relationships will PonyVille hold for them? Will Cloud ever solve a case? Is Rhapsody random or just plain mental? Find these and many more answers within this tale of Dragon ball- I mean... OC is Magic.
Chapters (2)
I like the story. It was really pleasant. You also did a really good job at introducing the characters. I'm gonna keep an eye on this one.
Sorry for the dark in this chapter, but I had to explain why Cloud was the only stallion in the world who could resist Rarity.