OC is Magic! Rewrite

by Cloud Shimmers

Sick Leave

Cloud was walking down Ponyville's main street, attempting to squeeze past the collective crowd of ponies. He was almost happy to see such of a mix of cultures; pegasi, like himself, unicorns, and earth ponies. All of them working together to create a friendly community, a community he would soon be part of. 'If I could ever find my house!' The cobalt blue colt finally managed to get through the crowd. He saw a mare walking down the street, "Excuse me miss?" He trotted up to her.

The pink pony let a large gasp when she saw him and sped off, leaving Cloud in some sort of daze.
"So much for small town hospitality." Cloud rubbed his head with a hoof. He looked over himself, his EBI jacket was covered in dust, as was his cutie mark, a badge with a lightning bolt coming from it. "Great, now I have to get it washed." He looked around once again for anyone he could call upon for directions. Unfortunately the only ones who didn't appear to be busy were three fillies. He walked over to them, "Excuse me girls I'm new in town and was wondering if-" He was interrupted by a yellow one wearing a bow in her mane.

"Mah sister told me not to talk to strangers." Applebloom turned from him.
Cloud smiled, "She must be very smart, what did she say about police officers?" He took out his badge and handed it to her.

The little orange pegasus widened her eyes, "Woah, you're a police officer?"
Cloud laughed, "Well, you could say Agent, only if it sounds cooler though."

"Oh wow!" The three said in unison, followed by a swarm of questions. "What does an agent do? How does a pegasus enforce the law without magic? Can we be agents too?" That's when they all gasped and shouted, "Cutie Mark Crusader Agents!"

Applebloom spoke up, "Please mister, you gotta make us your proto- potoge- Sweetiebelle what was that word Miss Cheerilee used?"

"Protégée," The unicorn smiled.
Cloud's eyes widened, he wasn't sure what was going on, or if he should back away slowly or not. "Uh, well, you see, its not really up to me, and I-" Cloud hear salvation from a mare's voice.

"SweetieBelle! What are you doing? I've told many times not to talk to Strange-" The very fashionable unicorn looked at Cloud's jacket. "Oh dear me, Sweetie have you gotten in trouble with the law?!" An argument broke out between the two, then the other two hyper fillies jumped in. After a few minutes the argument turned into a full blown verbal war between sisters. After ten minutes, the topic of boarding school came up, which made the young unicorn start to cry.

Cloud sighed, "Excuse me, can we all calm down? No one is in trouble, I would just like to get some directions!" He shouted.

The older unicorn stopped interrogating her sister, "Well, all you had to do was ask, mister?" She let him answer his name.

"Cloud Shimmers, I just moved here with my sister and I'm a little lost." Cloud looked down at the ground, trying to hide his shame.

The older unicorn smiled warmly, "Well Mr. Shimmers, I am Rarity, I would be happy to assist one who didn't lose his temper at my sister." She noticed his wings, "But I must ask, is there a reason you didn't just fly up and get a birds eye view?" Rarity didn't wait for an answer, "Unless you put up with these monsters just to speak with me, oh goodness you shouldn't have!" She beamed at him.

Cloud swallowed, his eyes widened again, "Uh, actually I sprained my wing, which explains why I'm here. I'm on a sick leave." He backed up a little bit.

"Oh, yes of course. How silly of me!" Rarity almost blushed over her assumption, most of the time she was spot on with this sort of thing. "Well, let me be the first to welcome you to our little hamlet. May I ask where you're from?"

"I'm moving here from Canterlot, not very special." Cloud answered modestly.
"C-Canterlot?" Rarity asked, "Are you positive you don't want to have some tea, back at my boutique?" She asked with a pout.

"No thanks, I'm really tired and would like to get home to Ice my wing." Cloud said simply. "Here's the address."

Rarity smiled, "Oh, I'll show you the way, but you simply must take me up on that offer for tea later." She lead him down a few streets, going on and on about how wonderful it must be in Canterlot.

"Maybe during the day." Cloud mumbled.
"What was that darling?" Rarity asked.

"I was just talking to myself, nothing important." Cloud asked, 'I really hope she calls everypony darling.'

They continued their walk with casual conversation, Cloud not picking up on any of Rarity's gesture's about how much she's wanted to fall in love with a brave and charming stallion from Canterlot. When they finally arrived at the house, the frotn door was unlocked, Cloud spoke quickly.

"Well Rarity, thank you so much for showing me the way, rain-check on the tea and I guess I'll talk to you later, okay?" Cloud slowly closed the door. He put his ear to it and listened for the sound of hoofsteps walking away. Once satisfied with the distance he called out, "Rhapsody, I'm home!" He walked around the semi large house. The house was practically two flats stacked atop eachother. Cloud's 'room' was more like an apartment, matching the main design of the bottom floor. They were lucky to find a house like this for a such a small amount of money, but Rhapsody had just received a huge payload from her latest job; baking the cake for the recent Royal Wedding. Well 'bake' is one word; Rhapsody was hired by AppleJack to design a cake fit for a princess, which is precisely what happened.

The rainbowed maned unicorn walked out of her bedroom and have her big brother a big hug, "I missed you bro!" She said excitedly. "Oh my gosh you are never going to believe what happened today, I met this pink pony, except I didn't meet her at all! She walked up and gasped at me and then ran off and it was the silliest thing, but it got me thinking, what if she's planing a surprise party for me?" Rhapsody had a huge smile on her face.

Cloud smiled at her, "You know sis, maybe we should stop buying the sugar filled cereal."
"Wait," Rhapsody sat down, "They make it without sugar? That's dumb."

Cloud hung his jacket on the coat rack, "Anyway, the same thing happened to me, I really need some rest right now though, because as soon as I'm healed up I'm supposed to check in with the local police department."

Rhapsody sighed, she looked at her brother sadly, "You know I worry about you every day, I know you love your job, but you really need a break before going back."

"Okay Rhapsy," Cloud messed up her mane with a hoof. "I'm going to get some sleep, tomorrow I'll use my sick leave to spend more time relaxing."

Rhapsody smiled at him again, "Goodnight Cloud."

Once Rhapsody was sure her brother was asleep, she left the house. Her white coat felt warm in the remaining sunlight of the day, she looked around and saw the local bakery, 'Sugar Cube Corner sounds like a great place to buy cupcakes!'

Upon entering the bakery, a warm breeze of cake batter hit her in the face. She casually walked up to the counter and rung the service bell. The same pink pony from before popped up right in front of her. "Oh, hey. Its the gaspy mare from before!"

"And you're the first new pony I met today!" Pinkie smiled, "I love meeting new ponies because it means that I get to make brand new friends!"

"Oh my gosh, I love making new friends too! I'm Rhapsody Sparkles." She said politely.
"I'm Pinkie Pie! You must've just moved here, or else I would have already known your name." The hyper mare said quickly.

"Yeah, I just moved in with my brother late last night!" Rhapsody smiled.
"Wait, a brother?" Pinkie crossed her eyes in thought, "He wouldn't happen to be a tall pegasus with a blue coat and a blonde mane would he?"

"Actually, yeah that's him!" Rhapsody laughed, "His name is Cloud, he's my BBBFF."
Pinkie almost exploded from excitement, "Now I can throw you two one humongous party instead of two normal ones, I'm so exited!!!"

Rhapsody clapped her hooves together, "Can I help plan our party? Please?" She batted her eyelashes.
"Absolutely!" Pinkie jumped up, "We can have games and cake and punch and cupcakes!"

The two began planning the party, it was to be held the next day in Cloud and Rhapsody's bottom floor. Both ponies were incredibly exited to surprise Cloud and to be able to become better friends.

Comments

[trigrbrony777]

I like the story. It was really pleasant. You also did a really good job at introducing the characters. I'm gonna keep an eye on this one.