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Violet Echoes


Tales from across Equestria!

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Oh good. You're uploading this here, too. :pinkiehappy:

A very great story, I'll be eagerly awaiting more

Wow was not expecting Fluttershy to be a nomad so what would that make Zecora

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All will be shown in time :p

These versions of events seem to go by much faster than the canon ones.

Like, not just taking into account the whole "more realistic" thing, I mean in general.

Though that's not really me complaining, just making an observation.

Right now, the biggest question I have is what this version of Sunburst is like.

And one thing I'd love to see eventually (even if it's just posted as a one shot separate as a bonus) is this version of Starlight somehow meeting her canon counterpart.
Even better would be if they ended up encountering each other multiple times:
Pre-village, post-village pre-reformation, and post-reformation.

I don't know how that would fit with the whole "rewrite the episodes to fit this AU" thing, but I still want to see it

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Early episodes was me more warming up but funny enough the reason for pacing differences is due to media.
Animation goes by slower than writing as I could literally write 30min of animation in half the length of one of these stories.
As for the canon x au crossover... you are the 4th person to want that. I don't see the appeal.

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Yeah, that can happen sometimes.

As for the appeal of Canon x AU, the appeal mostly just comes from the idea that the two versions of the cast reacting to each other would result in some humorous interactions.

So, Starlight a doormat, Applejack is a borderline con-artist and I can't even describe what the others have become.

Have a like.

Interesting idea to combine Boast Busters and Dragonshy like this.

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I know right?
When the episodes are not enough in TF mode I start to combine or get original.
And I will say, the later this series goes on the more of that will happen.
I even have fully original episodes planned.

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I mean, I can already think of a few obvious ones that'll need major changes (if they even occur at all) for this universe.

so where is starlight's version of spike?

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Twilight still has spike.
Will be explained eventually.

I keep going back to the parts about Dash to try to figure out how best to describe her behavior in this universe, and the best I can come up with is the randomness of canon!Pinkie combined with the laziness of her canon counterpart, with a bit of canon!Twi's love of books.

Yet I feel like even THAT isn't entirely accurate

I'm impressed that you managed to weave all 3 of the CMC episodes from season 1 into one like this.

On one hoof, I kind of miss the whole "Iron Pony" competition thing from the original episode.

On the other, I also realize that wouldn't work with this version of the characters.

Wow... that is deep.

It took me a few times rereading it... but did Starlight accidentally end up proposing slavery?

Alright, just because this chapter, I'm gonna wash away my personal problems with this story. So, personal hang-ups aside, shit's pretty good :twilightsmile:

Oh. Ooooh. I... I did not realize that. At all. Oh no.

Rarity, what the fuck xD

On a more serious note, hmmm... I liked this :twilightsmile:

Except the lack of Starlight qwq

Fluttershy, makes sense; Applejack, really curious what things she left unsaid; Rarity, yep; Pinkie. Pinkie, what are you doing. Pinkie, stahp xD Not 100% clear on what exactly the darkness was a metaphor for, but eh; Rainbow, huh... is this what I think it is...?; and Twilight makes sense, too. Seems a bit weak of a reason to eschew magic altogether though, but I guess it could work? Or is there more, after all?

Loved the running joke with Starlight, too.

I feel like we are being teased with Starlight background here, loved it.

You know, I really am glad that I decided to stick through it back then, when I read the first two or three chapters. For all it's flaws, this story is one hell of a wild ride, and much of it has been genuinely enjoyable. By all means, please do have a pleasant break, and I can't wait for when you're back with more :twilightsmile:

Now, that aside, this chapter. This chapter. It's a love-hate relationship right there, I tell you, all compressed into a neat little package of ten thousand words. I'm not even 100% sure what I hate about it, but I know there are things that bug me. Whatever. Overall I would say I like it more than not, so I won't dwell on it.

That being said, however, the ending was certainly the highlight for me, and I just can't wait to see the topic be explored further in the future. I do not know why, but this particular story thread has gripped me the hardest, and upon reflection, is really the main reason I am here, and is the reason for the first comment I left on this story.

Many props to you, and keep on keeping on :twilightsmile:

Well, at least starlight already recognized the issue previously, this is almost therapeutic now :applejackunsure:

Great as usual :pinkiesmile:

So Rainbow has prosthetic wings, or just the one?
(only now getting around to actually reading this, I had a busy week)

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The main bone/biggest pinion is artificial in each wing but the rest is organic.

Part of me is torn on that decision to make more original chapters from now on (not that I didn't like the original ones from this season).

Mostly because I kind of like seeing alternative takes on how episodes from canon WOULD play out in AUs (much more than I like seeing HISHE type fics)

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There will still be a mix of both, practically every special like the season end/start and all the villains are more parodies.

I'll be waiting for that suncake to have a great payoff in some future chapter!!
Or maybe it's just a running gag Idk

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