smirker
Joined 7th Mar, 2018 ·
Offline
Also LikedSimilarAuthor
- Revel Montaro · 180k words · 213 14 · 3.8k views
- Krieg cormac · 10k words · 59 2 · 1k views
- Hiver · 66k words · 862 19 · 5.9k views
- Masterweaver · 15k words · 105 5 · 2.1k views
- TalkingToMyself · 201k words · 85 4 · 2.8k views
- The Voice in the Water · 337k words · 551 5 · 7.9k views
- Krieg cormac · 1.2k words · 90 3 · 2k views
- PrismaGalaxy514 · 229k words · 85 21 · 3.2k views
Join our SubscribeStar to remove these adverts!
Join our SubscribeStar to remove these adverts!
Stats
Page generated in 0.071 seconds
Total duration
1,018 users online
2,012,975 hits today, 2,280,440 yesterday
FIMFiction
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Follow & Support Us
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
So confusing to read when you can't use tenses right. Stick to past tense if you want to be understood or use present tense if you wanna be a snowflake, but don't mix both. It was so painful to read I had to stop quite quickly, so can't really say anything else about the fic.
9786194
Are you counting the "said" and "asked" parts after the dialogues as well?
9787924
They should be in the same tense as the rest of the story, so of course.
9788085
Sorry about that, this isn't my usual typing style, I only made those past tense because the rules of the site say that I have to, if I could write stories my usual style, everything would be present tense.
Oh, you're one of those folks that think "hey, grammar doesn't affect me because I have my own style!" -folks. We have nothing else to discuss.
9788099
I am not, I am willing to take criticism and listen to others so I can try to improve my writing skills.