After Fluttershy and Applejack visit Kirin Grove, Twilight Sparkle demands a kirin in the School of Friendship, and since Autumn Blaze is already friends with Fluttershy and Applejack, she is sent, and so the day begins.
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Interesting, nice to see more fics with her in them! Liked the manic nature you captured
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Thanks, it was actually a little hard for me since there's only one episode of her so far, so I can't interpret her personality completely.
This was quite nice and Autumn Blaze is great. The shout outs were also funny.
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Thank you, which shout out was your favorite?
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I don't have a favourite and I'm not sure I caught all of them.
What I want to point out in this fic is try to shorten Autumn's name when characters speak hear name. Try and shorten it. It makes it feel less repetitive.
So Rain Shine finally dumps Autumn Blaze on someone else, that could be taken as an act of war!
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I could be friends with her.
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In my story involving her, I just made her a girl who obsessively likes everything, but has a short temper (Driving, being called a Nirik).
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I can see Autumn Blaze having a short temper, that is why I made her dislike losing games in my story.
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If someone cut her off when she was driving... yeah. I would want to see that. Gotta hand it to ya, you got her perfectly.
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Thanks, it was a little hard for me since there's only one episode of her, but I've been seeing signs she might be a breakout character, and might appear more in season 9.
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Well, she's easily my favorite now unless they ruin her.
Loved this story!
Can you make a sequel?
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I wasn't planning to, but I can try.
Autumn Blaze doesn't so easily get angry, is she? Author You wrote too many times she was angry.It's a bit out of line. No offense!
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None taken.
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Thank you, it's probably from practice, I've been creating my own stories since 2010.
While some things start to get really repetitive after a while, this story overall was still a lot of fun and pretty cute. Autumn was great and the connections she makes with the students for the most part feel really genuine, especially Silverstream. The classes were all rather creative and It'd be cool to see more of her reactions to Ponyville in some kind of sequel if you were interested, good job with this fic!
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Thanks, I haven't had thoughts of a sequel yet, and I'm busy working on another story right now.
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Awesome, what’s it about?
I'll try to upload it soon, don't wish to give spoilers, I'm working on the last chapter.
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Sounds good, best of luck!
Great story. You captured the Autumn Blaze 's personality well.
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Thank you.
Lol 😆 Optimus prime master yoda Grand galloping gala lol oh Autumn blaze you funny 😆
I feel like silverstream and autumn blaze Have more in common with each Both of them are very talkative creatures I guess because they been in hiding or in solitary
Autumn Blaze noticed Smolder taking a liking to the dress, but looked away in embarrassment when Autumn Blaze looked at her
Ohh Looks like smolder love the dress that autumn blaze did
oh sweet Celestia When you put those 3 together there's nothing to stop them from talking a long time lol
And again I knew that autumn blaze will love pinkie pie and silver stream Because all 3 of them have in common with each other they love to talk 🤣
OK so basically her 1st day of school for autumn blaze went pretty well even though there are some bumps on the road and I'm sure Gallus Smolder and yona Will give her a chance I mean you had to give her a break She Was silent for a very long time And this is the 1st time she ever talk to anybody other than her animate objects Plus she felt lonely but at least sandbar ocellus and silverstream Became Friends with her pretty well She's probably needs to learn how to control her emotion better but This was a pretty good story I was sort of hoping we will see more of her How she been doing in school But whatever you do that's up to you this was a good story keep up the good work
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Sorry this comment is a bit late, I was busy on another website. I have thought about doing a sequel several times, but I haven't been able to come up with anything yet, just bits and pieces so far, I'll see if I can make one in the future.
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Hey that's okay I'm sure you've been pretty busy and that would be pretty cool to see a story like this whatever you do take your time
Would it be something if the story converted to an episode for season 9?
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I actually thought about that when I first typed this one.
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Well, it can be for the season 9 2.0 revision as episode 3. Anyway, can you shorten Autumn's name so it won't be less repetitive, not to mention fix your grammar? You could've written Spike having a fantasy of marrying Rarity and their children look like kirins, after Autumn told him, she's half-pony, half-dragon. I hope you write a fic where Autumn Blaze tours Ponyville, and the young 6 take on a hot air balloon trip to their homelands, and she shows her friends the peaks of parol.
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To tell you the truth, I typed this story before I was given tips and pointers on how to improve making a story, this is also before I got a grammar check I can use online. I've also been a little conflicted on whether I should go back through my old stories and make them typed like my newer ones, or keep them as they are so I can see my own growth and improvements when I look back on them.
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Have you ever tried Grammarly?
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No
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Well, you should.
You know, you never wrote about Autumn in Twilight and Starlight's classes.
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I didn't think they were teachers at the time I typed this, I thought they were just headmaster and counselor respectively.
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Since I'm a member a the save mlp campaign, I've been talking to the leader about Hasbro adapting your story into an episode for the season 9 revision.
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