Im a fan of MLP, and enjoy a good fanfic. I'll write some of my own, if I can think of some good ones. I wont get popular, but I will enjoy writing my stories.
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(A very old story of mine, so the grammar is not the best) After being stuck on the moon for 1000 years, Luna has returned. But deep down, she feels something is missing, love. She knows her subjects and sister loves her, but she never thought anyone could ever love her after what she had done before. Then one day she meets a stallion named Thunderlane, and they are instantly in love, but with her duties and castle rules in the way, will their relationship last...
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dude, some constructive criticism. you gotta put spaces between each line of dialogue between characters.
example:
"come on, Twilight. it'll be fun." A.J. said, gesturing to a catapult.
"i don't know." a nervous Twilight said.
if it's just all put into one jumbled paragraph, it ain't gonna make sense.
1089050 Thank you, I am just starting out, and haven't figured out much how to write stories, thanks for being kind about unlike some rude comments.
1092152 no prob. oh, and don't center on on the, well, center. try moving it to the left.
1092152 wait. just looked in the story. ignore that last comment i said. now it's good.
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its alright, thank you so much for your advice! 
What matters is the story, which i think your doing a smashing job.
Ignore those grammar natzis
1152044 Thank you so much for you kind words
I'm just starting out here, and it makes me 
when someone like you comments like that
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i understand what you are going through completely.
just keep at it, and learn from your mistakes
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Ahh, A shipping with Luna and Thunderlane
, how orignal i'll shall read it soon.
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The idea sounds good and can't wait to give it a read. Hope it turns out well for you man
The end needs a little edit but great so far
1189827 Theres only one more chapter till the end, so I can't wait to write it!
thanks for reading and advice!
Good story, Love the Whole LunaxThunderlane, Cant w8 for last chap Thx brow
1264757 Thanks!
Loved this Love story, best one in my book, keep on writing...
Ho and lots of feels
FIRST OFF AMG. LAY OFF HER! It's her first freaking story!!!
So much feels
i like it to make it short^^ i have don´t much time right now
i have to admid that i spoiled me a bit rigth now. I forget it was a sad storie but i don´t thought it has to be a bad ending.
I was looking for a happy story tonight to lighten my mood, but i still want to admid this is one of the best stories i read so far.
I have become skilled at crying on the inside, as well as laughing on the inside, while reading fics. There was only once when no one was around that I actually had tears spilling from my eyes while reading an exceptionally sad fic, so I'm only crying on the inside right now..... But this was just too sweet!
Way too fast, but I like the plot.
Dude.....No
You could have put sad In the description, I am crying internally right now... I loved the story but now I kind of regret reading this.
Oh wait my bad nvm you did put sad in the description, I didn't notice.
This is one of the most moving MLP fanfictions I've ever read; really made me feel for the couple. I've often wondered if some sort of no-true-love rule like the one mentioned in this story actually applies to the royal sisters in canon.