Ponyville is just beginning to be built, and soon to be added onto the Equestria map. Among this new town sprouts a secret love between a Pegasus named Black Cloud and vampire bat pony named Sharp Wing. After a traumatic experience from an angry mob, the only hope Sharp Wing has is that his daughter, Night Heart, can live a normal life while growing up in Ponyville. Can Night Heart be able to live among regular ponies while also keeping her vampire bat pony father a secret in the Everfree Forest?
Chapters (2)
Not much to say, expect for: Duckface/10
wow, this really well written and the characters are interesting. was expecting something awful, given the like to dislike ratio. but, this is actually really good, not sure why people don't like it. looking forward to the next chapter 'v'
6204559 Thank you so much. I don't really understand myself why I'm getting a lot of dislikes, guess people don't really like OC stories that much? But that doesn't matter, your kind words are what will keep me inspired to finish this fic no matter what!
Wow, I love this! You really described the characters and the situations, and did very well on the dialogue as well! Liked and faved!
I don't get why all the dislikes- I mean, this is very well written! Do people just dislike OCs or something?