A unicorn stallion wakes up from stasis in a stable and is unsure of who he is. He knows nothing of his life or even his name. His search for answers will bring him to new places and to find new friends in the wasteland. The search will take him through danger across the tattered land once known as Equestria, but when he finds his purpose for being in the stable will he be ready for it? Can he handle why he was locked away, and the reason everything was taken from him? Follow our wasteland wanderer as he discovers the "new" land of Equestria and trys to understand this world he has been thrust into, and the creatures and pony's that now clam the land as their new homes.
First time putting a story up on any sight. Any comments about a typo or anything else helps.
Will drop it onto my nook and check it out for you and let you know what I think! Toss you an upvote too for grins!
New Chapter. Hope you enjoy it.
By the way its mane not main when it comes to ponies
great story too
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Thanks, I know what one it is. Just my editors, or me don't catch everything. Still thanks for telling me.
Oh its foals not fouls
just trying to help
If you need a pe-reader I might be able to help if you want. Never done it before but I thought I would ask.
I like the story by the way
Just chiming in, pretty good so far. I'm digging the nice cold start to it all. There are a few spelling things here and there, but other than that it looks pretty good.
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Thank you
okay this looks good. are you planning on continuing this at all?
2182270 yes. The next chapter is done but I need editors. I just need more.
2198907 check the groups and forums i know there are a couple of them here whose sole purpose is to help writers find editors