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The static whispered to him. It spoke of power, indefinite and unbeatable. He’d stand over the likes of Discord, Celestia, and Luna. Twilight and Cadence would be nothing in comparison. They spoke of greatness, destruction, and creation.
They spoke of sea and sky.
They spoke of earth and stars.
Of demons and gods.
Phoenixes and dragons, snakes and birds.
He dreamt of rocks and water.
He woke up.
He didn’t remember his dream. The dream.
A dream of rocks and water.
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Pretty spooky.
i like this...yes
This looks great so far! Looking forward to more.
Great work! Keep it up!
Welcome back! Loved this but was sad it seemed cancelled. Spike's powers seem to be growing, although some of the stuff he didn't consciously cause seemed REALLY strange. "Beyond Discord" is a scary thought, & you know what they say about ultimate power. Spike's a great guy though. I'm a huge Spirax fan, so the fact it's so blatantly obvious to everyone but them is great.
Looking forward to more whenever you can! No rush.
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This isn't cancelled, probably, I'm gonna write ch 4 this weekend. Or tonight. Depends on how tired I am after I gotta do all I gotta do this week. Either way, something getting written.
I do. It likes hats.
amazing story dude, keep up the good work!!!!!!!!!
the laughter tells me that twilight is going to have a nice time knowing she has been raising an elder god for most of her life
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Forget Lesson Zero, this might be the new biggest Twilight mental breakdown
Good shit man. Hope to see more soon
spike's true form will drive any being who looks at it insane since their minds will not be able to comprehend it.
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I finished workshopping the design actually, and it turned out pretty good. It's not that it's incomprehensible, it's just very powerful, very old magic.
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i thought spike was an elder god, and its said that whoever looks at the true form of an elder god will go insane so i though it would apply to this situation as well.
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Oh you would, (mostly) but it's because of the magic pressure I described back in ch7
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oh ok
This is some good story. I'm usually not one for gay paring, but this spike x thorax is very good.
what im wondering is what spike's true form will look like and how will everyone react
cant wait to see spike's true form!!!!!!
This is getting good.
now that's a form that's screams "Im an eldritch abomination and you better run away!!" i love it!!!!!!
Your drawing is quite good and very well rounded.
I like this story, but one thing I've noticed is that sometimes it's hard to tell who is talking when you format it like this.
I would recommend, instead something like this in the future
Basically, have the character's reactions be inside of the paragraph they are speaking in, rather than the one they are reacting too.
Love this story, and I can't wait to continue reading.
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Oh yeah, I've heard this before. I certainly prefer the second way, but I've had stories rejected on this site on the grounds of improper grammar, and grammar rules say that when a new character talks, new paragraph starts. The first paragraph of the two you wrote is 100% correct, but the second one technically isn't. While it certainly might not matter so long as the majority of the story isn't doing it, I don't want moderation on my back, so I'm trying to avoid it entirely. I'll see what I can do though! Glad you're enjoying.
i wonder what spike will do when he gets full control over his powers
This is very good. What will everyone's reactions be when they find out about spike and thorax, I can't wait to see!
i wonder what will come out?
I need more. This story has been very good so far. I see this going great in the future.
I don't think this chapter as mediocre. I think it's quite good.
Well that doesn't seem healthy for everyone.
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As a matter of fact, no. No it is not. Whether you mean the Katoblepones, or the Static.
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Before I read this, I must know: What's a Katoblepony?
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They were mentioned in the previous chapter. Katoblepones are a creature from greek myth, a sort of bull-buffalo that ate a root that gave them extremely toxic breath. In the actual myths, it was deadly, but this is FiM. Most things are non lethal here.
I wonder what Spike's gonna do now
Good stuff man.
ok now we have the ball rolling very fast for spike's relationship, also i think you should fix the error's you made when writing this
Good chapter.
now that was a good ending bravo!!!
Thay was an amazing story, and end. Great job.
What is greed he's lost? I don't see a story of that name in your story's?
This was great! I really loved the way you didnt focus on horror but on how their was acceptance first and foremost...and of course love. : )
I bet 20 bits that this is discord.
This chapter has got to be my favorite so far, It's just amazing.
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"Nah bro vaping is totally healthy"
I lost my 20 bits