• Member Since 1st Apr, 2012
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MidnightCrew


Oh god I love writing.

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The Keroro Platoon is stuck in the universe of My Little Pony. What the frog? How? Why? What the buck is going on? Read to find out!

Edit: 1/2/14 In honor of the third year of existence for this story? I have edited spelling and grammatical errors!

Edit 2: 8/14/15 Well then, time to edit a little more! Thanks everyone for liking this story so much!

Edit 3: 3/2/16 Ugh, this writing is atrocious...more editing. Thanks again!

Edit 4: 2/6/17 Wow, so much cringe. Even more editing.

Edit 5: This is the last edit, I'm cringing so hard at this that my face is collapsing in on itself. I need to fix all this. Anyways, have fun reading!

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Comments ( 26 )

it could use some work, but I like the idea. I started watching Sgt frog after seeing the abridged series.

I had this I idea and I still don't know how to go about it :twilightblush:

Strangely, I like that this leaves a lot up to the reader to interpret in terms of movement and scenery. You assume that the reader already knows a lot about it...in my case you've assumed correctly. It could use some work but for some reason its very entertaining. :duck:

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It rocks!
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Really?
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I wasn't sure at first either.

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I'm surprised you didn't just make sarge give up on earth and try to invade equestria instead but I'm sure the thought did cross your mind didn't it?

They do have teeth..... remember the episode when keroro had that cavity and they had to go in his mouth and kill the aliens causing it?

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:facehoof: aw frog...

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Yep! No idea of that!

Okay, everyone. There is a sequel to this. but it doesn't contain as much pony. so it will only be posted on DeviantART. You can find it here http://sillycookiesonic123.deviantart.com/gallery/#/d5blibr

:yay: my two favorite shows coming togather :yay:

i never got the kerokerotamatama thing

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xD I love both shows. I thonk the kerokero tamatama thing is when they communicate or something.

This is... Interdasting. Haveing read quite a bit of SGT Frog I can understand how the action feels when I read it, but I really think that the way they move and some other visual details should be juiced up, mainly for people who haven't read SGT frog.
From the viewpoint of someone who hasnt seen or watched, I kind of felt like "wtb is going on too random, too fast".
That being said:
KeroKeroKeroKeroKeroKero
TamaTamaTamaTamaTamaTama
GiroGiroGiroGiroGiroGiroGiro
KuruKuruKuruKuruKuruKuru
DoroDoroDoroDoroDoroDoro
TwiliTwiliTwiliTwiliTwiliTwili
AppleAppleAppleAppleAppleApple
RainbowRainbowRainbowRainbowRainbowRainbow
PinkiePinkiePinkiePinkiePinkiePinkiePinkie
FlutterFlutterFlutterFlutterFlutterFlutter
RarityRarityRarityRarityRarityRarity

hahaha you have a point, kukuku.

quite hard to follow so far, but still fucking funny

Hahahahahahahahahhahaha lol :rainbowlaugh::rainbowkiss: Nice job
"I'll have a number 4 combo." :yay:

O3o epicness:pinkiehappy:

Well there goes Pinky Sanity:pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy:

2839985 Thank you Thank you have been a wonderful audience :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

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