William Colley has been a Ranger in the Territoy of Arizona for the better part of a decade.
After three years chasing criminals across the territory, he is closing in on one of his biggest targets yet. Weeks prior, the husband/wife/brother gang had derailed a train to steal the gold a car had been moving east from California. Their heist left behind a ransacked train and 23 slain passengers.
After weeks of hunting, Colley has finally found them.
He awakens besides the rails, in a desert that is almost certainly not his own. Eventually, he'll have to find a way home.
For now, he has to find a new horse.
Chapters (2)
Sounds like the start of a good story, will definitely continue reading.
I'm intrigued.
OK. You have my attention.
https://www.azcentral.com/story/news/local/tempe/2014/07/18/tempe-man-pioneered-cotton-growing-arizona/12857579/
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Thanks. This is supposed to be set in the late 1890's or very early 1900's, so a massive cotton farm would be a bit strange but the idea of seeing cotton wouldn't be too big of a shock.
I can edit this if you like.
You have my attention as well looking forward to more.
Wait so does he have broken ribs or not? Because that’s seems important.
This story looks great!
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I'll get into it more next chapter, but probably a hairline fracture. I've got to do some fiddling with these first two to make it more clear. Broken ribs are weird to begin with because basically the only way for them to heal is to leave them alone. Anyway they also heal pretty quick. So between his little developing habit, the liquor, and the days to heal, while it would certainly be hurting in the morning intoxication and adrenaline would probably cut it away in the moment.
It is a potential plot hole I'm going to be sure to fill though.
Thanks for reading
Hoo boy, wearing leather in Equestria. That's not going to end well for a while.
Cool chapter, keep it up
Good work, good conclusion especially.