The story is about my OC waking up with out any memory's of who he is or what he his. He goes on a journey of self discovery, meeting many ponies along the way, As he try's to figure out more about himself.
Chapters will come as I write them. by the end everpony will be in this story, from the manesix to darpy and everpony in between. The first chapter is short, but the others will be longer.
Not really sure if this has been done before. If not good for me, if it has sorry for a repeat of it then.
there will OC X Rainbow Dash shipping in the story also.(but that's a lot later in the story though)
Constructive criticism is welcome, and if you like plz favorite it.
Chapter 5 Edited by bronys unite, thanks to him
Chapters (5)
Chapter two is done just a bit lazy to upload it will get it up soon
You are doing 's wrong.
and what might that be????
1055396
Apostrophes. He meant apostrophes. These guys: '
Also, 'Darpy'. LOL.
>>stereo_sub
Ah I see thanks for the heads up
Aside from some prety bad grammar and spelling, this seems pretty good so far. I really like the idea, but the way you phrase things is a little awkward. Aside from those little things this story definitley has potential!
The grammar is a tad bit off but I have the same problem and you can easily spell chehk things like that and there are some reapeted words and such and some punctuation misplacement and you missed some capitalization. If you reply to someones message yo have to click the double comment bubbles are they won't be notified that you responded. But this seems like a good story I think I will track it and I am just trying to be constructive not a troll>>1055396 and that is how you show some one you replied to their comment just if you would like to know I would fix some of the grammar though are you will get trolled no doubt about it
I have been trolled for bad grammar though
1055450
I was kind of expecting some trolls, but its all good i'll try better with my writing thanks for all the great advice
how do you plan on making a romance rated E that seems hard to me that means like no suggestive jokes at all how can one live like that
1055467 It's all good. untill black people drive by my best friends hous then the situation is FUBAR
i will find a way, most likely its going to a tasteful romance, nothing to big or suggestive
An OC with amnesia that eventually falls in love with Rainbow Dash...
Tch, yeah, sorry but this sounds like something that's been done before...
...several times in fact that I've stopped keeping track of the stories' names.
Good try, though.
I wish you good luck as an author. *insert Rainbow salute here*
1055486
ya i figure that as much but you never know, until you try
1055491 WO WO WO WAIT UP is rainbow your favorite pony and if so how did I not notice
1055695
will its between rainbow and pinkie
Just saw RECALL today so i was like 0.0 when i read the description.
REKALL
I think a recall crossover would be cool like you go in the chair and they give you the memory of ponyville and somehow you get there.
1055729 Well I feel stupid
1055780
that would be cool
1055795
it happens to all of us
1055806 I couldn't agree more now back to my porn
Chapter two is up, enjoy
Chapter 3 is now up please enjoy
awesome
1069763
thanks
1069910no problem
1069942
thanks again
Chapter 4 is now up, Enjoy all
1081547 So who is the love interest?
It should be a harem
1086125
you will have to read it to find out
it should be your or you not y'all, y'all means that your adressing multiple people or in this case ponies. Also your mixing up will with well, will meas that we will go to that race, well is like a suggestion like well you might want to head to town
Hey I could pre-read if you like I could help you with spelling and word placement, but I'm not good with puntuation
1092705
I do all my writing on word first, before i post a new chapter
1093029 It's all good just an offer
1093037
I wouldn't mind your help
Okay then just find a way to messaging me so I can reciev it and edit what mistakes I see
1093120
I just started chapter 5 it should be done sometime today
Chapter 5 is up enjoy
Thanks goes to bronys unite for a great editing job
Well that escalated quickly
That... Was sudden...
yes other than typos and word usage... "Y'all should know i am diggin' the story" keep it up.
P.S she is right on the Y'all
plus (very, not vary)
Definatly a good read though.
Yes i know that i have errors, what do you want from someone that doesn't write all that much
Uhhhhhhhhhhhhhh....... $$$$$$$$
good work when do u think the next one will be done
1355111
im not really sure at this point. but i will come back to finish it soon
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hello its been 6 weeks r u alive
1612254
Ya i alive, Just been really busy with school, I still tend to finish this story soon