Who Am I
I wake up in the middle of a field, not knowing where I’m at, or what day it is, for a matter of fact I don’t even know my name, who I am, or what I am. As I look at my body I find out that I have four legs and a tail, not sure what all this means by a long shot. I try and stand up, after seeing that I was lying on the ground. As I try and pull my front legs under my body trying to get my balance, only to fall flat on my face.
“I just seem can’t seem to get my balance”, I think to myself
I try again trying to get to my hoofs well I think that what the bottom of my legs are called. I finally manage to get all four legs under my body, and then I push up, raising my body off the ground, finally standing on all fours I try and take a step forward , I found when I move my left hoof, my right back hoof moves. Not really knowing that I fall back to the ground, landing in a puff a dust
“OUCH” I cry out, looking around making sure no one saw me fall as a sack of apples
Getting back on my hoofs, I managed to get a few steps, before fall down again, but I getting the hang of walking on four legs, but I’m not sure why I’m having a tough time with this, but having no memory will do that to you, after a few more times of falling down and getting back up, I got the hang of walking on all fours, a spend a few more minutes walking around the field that I woke up in. I look back to inspect what my body looks like when it’s not laying on the ground. From what I can tell, I think I’m male, my coat is all black with some light red in the tail and my hair, there is a weird make on both sides of my back legs, I’m guessing of what to call it, so I’m going to call it my flanks. Having said that to myself it sounds about right. One other thing that I noticed is two extra appendages coming out from my shoulders, I fell that these other appendages are very important to my body. I extend the two appendages from my body trying to figure out what they are and what they might do. As they start to unfold the new things at my side, I start to figure out what they might be,
“There wings, why would I have wings? Just what kind of thing am I? I’m just really confused on what’s going on.”
When I stop talking and listen expecting an answer to my question, but finding none coming my way. Still looking at my wings, I think to myself “maybe I can fly or something, but I better found someone first that might know something about me, and where I am.” I fold my wings back against my body. I finally take a look around at my surrounding’s, the closest thing that I can see in a big red barn, that is surround by fields of apple trees, but see no one about, I turn my head to left seeing a road leading somewhere in to the distance, I turn my head to the left and only seeing the field that I woke up in.
I decide that the best place to start is that big red barn. I just hope there is someone there that can tell me what I am, where I am, and the hope of finding my in this weird world. I start walk toward the big red barn, still a little shaky, but getting over it quickly. The walk to barn will be a bit of a long one, as I’m walking slowly so I don’t fall flat on my face again. The barn looks to be a few miles away it going to some time to get there. I head off to the barn in the distance, hoping something will help me out.
As I start walking towards the big red barn that's in the distance, I hear whats sounds like hoof steps coming up from behind me. I turn around to see if something is fallowing me. With a quick turn of my head, I look back and see nothing there, i start turning my head back toward the big red barn, still in the distance only to see, a poofy pink thing in my way, that smells a bit like cotton candy. That's all i can see in fount of me, then I hear a vary loud gasp from the poofy pink thing, then it was gone. Shakeing my head thinking was was just see thing, all the while looking for the pink thing block my path to the red barn, but not seeing a thing.
"Whatever that was I'm not really sure I want to know what it could be." I think to myself
I continue on ward to the red barn, getting a bit closer with every step that I take. During that time of walking i continue to think to myself, "Where am I, Who am I, what in the hay was that pink thing that smelled like cotton candy. I just i can find something the can help me out. "Why did i just say what in the hay." Still not sure whats going on, I continue to the barn.
I start seeing more details of the red barn. It looks like its been recently repainted. I think to myself "so there is something here, that might help me with my problem." Other things I see are baskets laying on the ground all around the barn, some have apples in them, and the ones that don't have anything in them are stacked up in nice little rows up against the side of the barn. "Who ever did this takes good care to make them look good."
Chapter two is done just a bit lazy to upload it will get it up soon
You are doing 's wrong.
and what might that be????
1055396
Apostrophes. He meant apostrophes. These guys: '
Also, 'Darpy'. LOL.
>>stereo_sub
Ah I see thanks for the heads up
Aside from some prety bad grammar and spelling, this seems pretty good so far. I really like the idea, but the way you phrase things is a little awkward. Aside from those little things this story definitley has potential!
The grammar is a tad bit off but I have the same problem and you can easily spell chehk things like that and there are some reapeted words and such and some punctuation misplacement and you missed some capitalization. If you reply to someones message yo have to click the double comment bubbles are they won't be notified that you responded. But this seems like a good story I think I will track it and I am just trying to be constructive not a troll>>1055396 and that is how you show some one you replied to their comment just if you would like to know I would fix some of the grammar though are you will get trolled no doubt about it I have been trolled for bad grammar though
1055450
I was kind of expecting some trolls, but its all good i'll try better with my writing thanks for all the great advice
how do you plan on making a romance rated E that seems hard to me that means like no suggestive jokes at all how can one live like that
1055467 It's all good. untill black people drive by my best friends hous then the situation is FUBAR
i will find a way, most likely its going to a tasteful romance, nothing to big or suggestive
An OC with amnesia that eventually falls in love with Rainbow Dash...
Tch, yeah, sorry but this sounds like something that's been done before...
...several times in fact that I've stopped keeping track of the stories' names.
Good try, though.
I wish you good luck as an author. *insert Rainbow salute here*
1055486
ya i figure that as much but you never know, until you try
1055491 WO WO WO WAIT UP is rainbow your favorite pony and if so how did I not notice
1055695
will its between rainbow and pinkie
Just saw RECALL today so i was like 0.0 when i read the description.
REKALL
I think a recall crossover would be cool like you go in the chair and they give you the memory of ponyville and somehow you get there.
1055729 Well I feel stupid
1055780
that would be cool
1055795
it happens to all of us
1055806 I couldn't agree more now back to my porn