a random girl who has been obsessed with MLP since the beginning. if you want an editor, I'm happy to help
Twilight is Equestria's rock. As the newest and most popular princess, everyone's looking to her for everything from advice to fashion trends. Sometimes, she still has nightmares from her and her friends' various adventures, but she has to stay strong. For Equestria.
Sometimes, the heroes need saving, too.
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The title suggests only 6 chapters, yet this is marked incomplete?
9550999
im an idiot, I forgot to change that
fixed
9551046
Okay
I faved this story! I love it! But some words were miss spelt, but I still love it!
Having read the chapter and looking at the tabs, I'm unnerved and I feel like something creepy is going to happen. It was too short, too convenient and it just left me scared for best pony.
The reality of having difficult customers is something that you can't seem to escape from, even in fantasy, poor Pink Ponk.
Okay... yeah. I'm getting Cosy Glow feeling times ten. She just appears at the correct time, but that's not the creepiest part, it's like she can read their minds.
Look, it's way past midnight an I'm not in the most stable mind, but when I read that, I got chills, it felt like a fourth wall break.
Surprisingly, this chapter didn't leave me paranoid to hell. The ending left me a bit confused though, curious to what is going to happen next, every chapter reveals a bit more to Twilight.
Oh, I think I understand what's happening.
Is it Twilight doing her finale acts?
Overall thoughts, I originally thought this was going to be a grimdark stroy, kinda feel silly now.
With some small changes, this can be a really good stoy, whether that be rewriting words or changing situations and problems.
What I really liked was the build up, it felt a bit weird when reading it the first time, but with foresight that they where just examples from each of the six.
Personally, I would have done this through a one shot, all though Twilight's perspective and having her making her way to her seat, but having it so she keeps thinking back to the examples on her way to her throne. That way suspense would have lasted throughout one clear journey.
This has a lot of potential and I can't wait to see what you write next
honestly(Pun intended) I would rather be single than having kids.
9551208
Wait nvm, i misinterpret the story
it nice i love
Oh my God, I was a idiot when I wrote that comment, it doesn't matter some things were MI's spelt, I feel bad now sorry. :(
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lmao it's fine