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star-girl


a random girl who has been obsessed with MLP since the beginning. if you want an editor, I'm happy to help

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Twilight Sparkle thinks she will never die.

She wasn't prepared when her friends died, when she could only die when her domain - friendship - faded away. Friendship never faded. She was stuck being immortal for all of time. Even dragons - even Spike - were not fully immortal like she was, just long-lived. Even Celestia and Luna went, when the sun exploded and obliterated the moon. Even Discord went, when Faust, the Creator, fulfilled her promise and remade the world into perfection. Yet she was stuck as an alicorn, watching universes rise and fall.

Twilight Sparkle is wrong.

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Congrats! You get a like.

I haven't made up my mind about how I feel about this story. It was fairly well done, but a couple of plot points were just thrown at me with little to no context or explanation (namely, Cadance and Flurry leaving the planet, the timeline resetting, and Faust showing up).

A valiant effort, especially for one traveling such a well-worn path, but I think I need some more time to think about this one.

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Thanks! Feel free to give criticism; I'm here to improve my writing, nothing more :twilightsmile:

W- what this was so beautiful... how did this little gem hide away for so long

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