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White Corbie
Hi! I'm Corbie... White Corbie. The writer, the dreamer and the storyteller
White Corbie
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Now what?
Will be interesting to see what happens next and how the interactions with Luna turn out. Keep up the good work.
This looks interesting, though I highly recommend you go back through to correct some grammatical errors, such as misplaced words and some tensing inconsistencies.
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Oh, fine. I'll look into it after I write the seventh chapter.
Not A heroes I think is the single worst title I've ever seen in any story ever. I was turned off by the third word.
awwwwwwwwwwwww...y it gonta be anthro....that cover art looks bad ass lol
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Fine. Will take into account... Wait, Jest?! Oh, Sweet Celestia! I've been commented by Jest
The grammar is kinda really bad I suggest you use read out loud to fix it cause when you hear it read back to you, you can pick up on what doesn't sound right even if english isn't your first language.
If the main OCs in this story were voiced, what would they sound like?
hmmmm why do I have feeling reason twilight is in trouble is cause she and cadence fell in love.....