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"I smell more delicious torment. You certainly don't disappoint."
Today I discovered a new fetish that I apparently never knew I had: domestically-charged political intrigue. This is so hot it makes my phone's battery explode like C4.
Edit: also I feel like a monster for being turned on by a child. But it's just fiction.... Right?
This is indeed f*cked up.
And Nergal's in the f*cking corner.
Why is he in the f*cking corner.
Get out of the f*cking corner.
And surprisingly the tone between both stories has changed quite a bit.
To be honest I was a little concerned when I read the first story of this series and the first chapter of this new one. I kept reading mostly because I thought it was pretty darn arrousing. But I'm happy with how this ended. It's good to see Twilight standing up for herself. I still don't like how everyone seems cool with treating a PRINCESS like a two-bit whore (seriously how is that remotely legal?).
I mean I get that Twilight allows it cause it's like her thing, not going to kink shame (I am still reading this after all). But does the title of princess equate to something lower in power in this universe? Does Celestia not exist to lend her a hoof? Because I feel like the moon's population would rise staggeringly after she found out.
Or is this just good clop and I shouldn't ask questions?
Your story is great so far, I'm really digging the political intrigue as well. This story actually got me to sign up to FimFicition just so I could say this :)
While Twilight is doing what she is doing right now I can only imagine that this is playing in her head:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OTZXqqARIPY
Loving the story so far, I hope it continues on into a full story!
I love your story how to love your princess and how to serve your Kingdom Can you do a story that take place before the two-story and I can understand the two stories that I read if you can do a story before these two
I loved this fic! I hope you write more on Lux's stay with Twilight and her guards in Ponyville. Extremely spicy!
Wow. Only 2 stories and you have successfully blown my mind both times.
Bucking wow.
Bravo and keep up the great work.
Oh hell yes. How to Love Your Princess was great, and so is this. What I like the best is that it isn't just pointless sex; there is a very good story in here, it just so happens to contain quite a lot of sex, like it's pretending to be some consensual non-consensual version of Romance Reports.
Hopefully we'll be getting more like this in the future.
There's my girl XD
Excellent, again.
It did feel a bit like Twilight was taking advantage of Lux during that first seduction, which was a bit uncomfortable, but I suppose that goes
handhoof in hoof with this breed of diplomacy. I hope Twilight stays true to her word in caring for her...Which leads me to the ending which I can't figure out. She 'said no' I presume to Lux in accordance with the deal, yet she's still riding back to Ponyville with her
while getting a ride herself. Is it meant to imply Twilight double-crossed Wind by upholding her offer to Lux as soon as she had the weather agreement in writing? Or is she just visiting temporarily? I can't tell, and Ione would be pissed either way10008943
Twilight got Wind Shear to agree to perfect weather, but in the end turned him down because she couldn't bring herself to say no to Lux. So now she's stuck with no weather agreement and a child ward she has to take care of.
As for taking advantage of Lux at the start, you're right. I tried to design Lux to be vulnerable to others taking advantage of her. I try not to write easy-to-digest porn since there's so much of it. My goal is uncomfortable boners (and lady-boners). Plus, it's more of a personal challenge.
I'm glad you enjoyed it, and thanks for the comment. Comments like this are what it's all about for me.
This was an awesome story. Sordid, challenging, and sweet as well. Lux is a new favourite OC of mine. I'd really really love to read more of her. Especially more of her fitting into Ponyville and getting *comfy* with the guards.
Twilight forgot to do what lone told her to do. I assumed if she did they would of continued in the bedroom.
I was so hoping that after Twilight got the perfect weather from the them; The Ambassadors would still fuck Twilight in the end. That would of been hilarious given the situation, and how Twilight wouldn't say no.
i would say twilight played those dickheads like a fiddle xD
I don't know how I didn't read this particular story. So excellent!
Honestly, in the long run it's a good thing she picked Lux instead of perfect weather. Because once they get the factory up and running they won't have to deal with contract renewals. . . Also Lux is awesome.
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Hey, someone made some fanart of Lux.
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OMG, it's awesome!
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I would love to write short story based off that line.
What if Twilight did do as Lone said and thanked her and asked for more.
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I have to disagree because the biggest person taking advantage of everyone was lux and she did not even know she was doing it. Her dad would do anything for her. Her mom basically was the strongest one but she can't be around all the time. And Twilight said she could say no to her but at the end she did not. Luxe is the MVP. And I'm going to drop my logical questions. Like can't the princess this command people to do things? Or better yet they'll tell Celestia but I'm not going to ask those questions. Because Twilight is not the inipulating type seems to the cause rarity. But in my imagination I could see how both sides can recover from this. The parents allows their daughter to get a royal education while helping them build us the same weather factory which cloudsdale will get 50% of and then cloud scale. Get a cut a ponyville don't have to worry about any of the other areas and they can enjoy each other's company like backstabbers usually do.
I still think about this story fairly often. That ending, damn.