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I'm tired beyond recovery by sleep. It's like my soul is tired. That's the only way I can describe this all-pervading feeling. Like I can't make a smile that isn't somehow insincere.
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Is their a prequel?
11162987
No, it's a one-shot.
11162989
That sucks.
She is a magical siren from another dimension. I highly doubt they will "intimidate" her, or her sisters.
Edit: Why do I have negatives too?
11163037
You mean intimidate? Maybe, maybe not. Aria is a lot weaker now that she lost most of her Siren powers. And judging by the trailer they were living in during the time loop movie, the Dazzlings hadn't exactly made something of themselves when they had them.
Love how you word this whole thing good work!
11163623
Thanks!
Sadly, the most interesting parts of this story happen before the story starts. I'd much rather see Aria and her escort, how that dynamic worked, how resistant she was and how easily she submitted. Instead, all that's here is a rushed little aftermath. There's not a whole lot wrong with the writing itself, but I think you made some fatal errors on a conceptual level.
Thanks for your submission!