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I write TF stuff. Commissions are open, $20 for 1000 words.
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Despite your opinion of the piece, you have me intrigued. Let's see where this goes.
this is a tasty tasty premise and i hope you do it lotsly and in goodly fashion
Will this story have any sex scenes, implied or otherwise, where the woman does most or all of the work?
Welp. No way this could possibly go wrong.
Huh. This is quite a bit better than what I expected going in. Hope to see more.
It is nice to see more subtle suggestions and not just a *snap fingers* "I win" instant entrancement. This guy's going to have to work for it if he wants three sirens on his arms.
Well, on his arms and happy about it.
Quite curious and eager to see where this goes and how it plays out.
Second person? EWWW
Drama approaching. Also assorted body parts. We'll see what unfolds next time.
Excellent chapter but you got some inconsitencies.
In chapter two the pass worked well in the phone and I thought that no one had a perception of the charachters orders.
Switched to first person in the middle of the chapter.
Good chapter though admit was expecting more with that warning at the start, because as far as rape/mind control sex goes pretty tame so far compared to most of the other fics you can find. But all together still pretty good chapter.
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It's just in the interest of caution, this isn't my usual kind of writing.
it lives
I mean, it's almost consensual. More or less. Definitely less problematic than most of the perspective character's other options. At least he's aware that he might be turning into a monster, though that won't stop the slide.
Glad to see this story still alive and eager to get to the spicy stuff.