• Published 21st Feb 2019
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A New Student - smirker



Autumn Blaze is sent to the School of Friendship.

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A New Student

Twilight Sparkle wanted to spread friendship out even further than it already was, and wanted to spread it to Kirin Grove, so she sent Fluttershy and Applejack back there to inform them. The day for the kirin student comes and Twilight Sparkle was excited,

"Hello, I am Rain Shine, ruler of Kirin Grove." Rain Shine said,

"Wow, you look a bit like Princess Celestia." Twilight Sparkle replied,

"I get that a lot, anyway, I brought your student here, she's a lively one, say hi to Autumn Blaze." Rain Shine said, and Autumn Blaze trotted forward,

"Hi, guys, I am so excited to be here." Autumn Blaze said, Fluttershy and Applejack reel back in shock with their teeth clenched and exposed.

Autumn Blaze was excited and saw Fluttershy and Applejack, she runs to them and hugs them tightly, squashing the two,

"Oh, Fluttershy and Applebees, I am so glad to see you two again." Autumn Blaze said, she rubbed her cheeks against their faces,

"Autumn Blaze, yer squashin' us." Applejack said, and she lets go and chuckles embarrassingly,

"Sorry." Autumn Blaze said,

"It's alright, Autumn Blaze, and it's Applejack, not Applebees." Applejack replied,

"Sorry, there are still some words I can't pronounce right." Autumn Blaze said,

"We can give you some lessons if you need it. I'm Twilight Sparkle, I'm the school's Headmare, that's Starlight Glimmer, our counselor, this is Spike, my assistant..." Twilight Sparkle replied, Autumn Blaze looked at him,

"Wow, I've never seen a dragon before, well, I'm half dragon, but I've never seen a full dragon before." Autumn Blaze said,

"What's your other half?" Spike asked,

"Pony, unicorn to be specific." Autumn Blaze replied, Spike began to look at Rarity,

"Anyway, these other three are our professors along with Fluttershy and Applejack, that's Rarity, that's Rainbow Dash, and that's Pinkie Pie." Twilight Sparkle said,

"Wait, do you have both, a horn and wings?" Autumn Blaze asked,

"Um, yes, I am a princess, so I'm an alicorn." Twilight Sparkle replied,

"Wow, I have so much to learn about the outside whirl. World." Autumn Blaze said,

"Well, here's your pamphlet, and we'll give you a tour around the school." Starlight Glimmer replied,

"Wow. Really? Thank you, a tour really would be nice." Autumn Blaze said,

"This way, Autumn Blaze, I'll show you around." Fluttershy replied, and the two walk together.

Fluttershy and Autumn Blaze walk around and look around,

"Oh, my gosh, this place is amazing." Autumn Blaze said,

"The dormitories are over here, Autumn Blaze, ponies aren't the only people attending this school." Fluttershy replied, and she shows it to Autumn Blaze, the room was big and had a bed in it,

"Wow, this room is bigger than my entire house." Autumn Blaze said,

"Make yourself at home, Autumn Blaze, the shower and bathroom are over there, and that's your alarm clock, class starts at eight o'clock every morning." Fluttershy replied,

"Okay, I'll start unpacking, them. Then." Autumn Blaze said, and she runs in and out of the school while getting her things, she got her imaginary friends, pictures of herself with her imaginary friends, her play scripts, her drawings and paintings, her tea brewing supplies, her drawing and painting supplies, and her costumes and props for plays. Autumn Blaze managed to get her couch in after a brief struggle, she also brought in a table, Autumn Blaze laid down in bed and sighed happily as she wrapped the blanket around herself, and slept peacefully for the night, excited about attending school.

Autumn Blaze wakes up early and began getting ready for her first day, she takes a shower, brews and drinks tea, and begins rehearsing what to say for her introduction in class, the bell rings and class was starting, Autumn Blaze went outside her room and everycreature was heading to the same class, Autumn Blaze follows them.

Applejack was the first teacher of the day, and Autumn Blaze sat at the front of the class,

"Is that a new student?" Ocellus asked as she moved around in her desk since she could not get a good view of Autumn Blaze,

"Where? Yona do not see new student." Yona said,

"Over there, to the farthest row to our rights, in the front seat, that looks like a new student." Ocellus replied, Yona was trying to see who it was,

"Alright, y'all, settle down, class is in session, we have a new student today, her name is Autumn Blaze, come on up here and introduce yerself, Autumn Blaze, and keep it brief." Applejack said, and Autumn Blaze became excited, she stands up and trots to the front of the class, she turns around and faces the class, some students gasp with surprise, they have never seen a kirin before,

"Hi, guys, my name is Autumn Blaze, I am really excited to be here and I hope you all are excited to have me here, and sorry if I get your name wrong, there are some words I haven't said in like forever, and there are some words I can't pronounce properly, but I hope you all can understand me and I hope we all get along. Any questions?" Autumn Blaze asked,

"Um, what are you?" Ocellus asked,

"Why, thank you for asking, I am a kirin, half pony, half dragon." Autumn Blaze asked, shocking the students, they reeled back,

"Half dragon?!" Smolder asked,

"Half pony?!" Sandbar asked,

"Uh-huh, this is my first time ever meeting full dragons, I've heard about them in the Dragon Lambs. Land. Lands. I don't know much about our kind's creation, Rain Shine doesn't like to talk about it, she's our village's leader. Anyway, I'm still having trouble pronouncing words because two kirins got mad, burned our home down, and we were forced into a river that took away our voices, and we just recently got it back and..." Autumn Blaze said,

"Autumn Blaze, Ah told ya to keep it brief." Applejack said,

"Oh, come on, Applejack, I've been busy rehearsing for this moment all morning, I have so much to talk about." Autumn Blaze replied,

"Well, save it for later, Ah gotta get to teachin'." Applejack said, Autumn Blaze became excited to learn and soon sat, Sandbar and Ocellus were bewildered by her talkative nature, Gallus, Yona, and Smolder found her annoying already, and Silverstream was excited, seeing the potential to make a new friend,

"Alright, y'all, before Ah start, Ah'm gonna warn y'all now, don't make Autumn Blaze mad, kirins ain't pretty when they're angry." Applejack said, and she began teaching.

Applejack does lectures on honesty and apples,

"Ooh, it's just like that play I once wrote on a poisoned apple." Autumn Blaze said,

"Save it for later, Autumn Blaze." Applejack replied,

"Can I talk about it, please, Applejunk? Jack." Autumn Blaze asked,

"Have you ever tried a tongue twister?" Gallus asked sarcastically,

"I can do that." Autumn Blaze replied, and she twists her tongue around,

"No, a tongue twister is a phrase that's difficult to pronounce." Ocellus said,

"Come on, y'all, we're gettin' off track here, save it for Pinkie Pie's class." Applejack replied, and they continued.

Autumn Blaze tries to be excited but was finding class to be boring, Autumn Blaze groans as she waits for class to end,

"Okay, y'all, who wants to watch me buck an apple?" Applejack asked, they cheer and Applejack kicks one,

"Ooh." the students except for Autumn Blaze said,

"Come on, Autumn Blaze, join in." Applejack said,

"But it looks boring." Autumn Blaze replied,

"Well, what did you do back at home?" Silverstream asked,

"We ate apples, not kick them, and they were also friends of mine." Autumn Blaze replied,

"You guys have apples as friends?!" Silverstream asked,

"Only she does, Silverstream, they're imaginary friends." Applejack replied,

"There's nothing wrong with that, I'd like to pretend my Hearth's Warming doll is a friend sometimes." Sandbar said,

"Really?! Oh please, oh please teach me, I have tried to make a doll many times but could never get the hang of it." Autumn Blaze replied,

"Alright, Autumn Blaze, but later." Sandbar said, Autumn Blaze became sad,

"Wanna try bucking an apple, Autumn Blaze?" Applejack asked,

"Alright." Autumn Blaze replied, and she focuses, she bucks one with her hind left hoof and she kicks it, the others cheer, Autumn Blaze was not having fun,

"Ugh, this is boring, I want to do a play or sing." Autumn Blaze said,

"We did a play recently." Smolder replied a little annoyed,

"Yeah, we need a break." Gallus said,

"Really? Please tell me what it was like, tell me every little detail, from the props, to the costumes, to the budget and everything you all had to buy to make the play work, and the actors and actresses needed to..." Autumn Blaze said and she goes on,

"Ugh! Yona not liking new student!" Yona said,

"Tell me about it." Smolder replied while covering her ears, and Autumn Blaze rambled on and began talking about her own plays,

"Really?! Can you act out a scene from one of your plays for us?" Silverstream asked, excited to meet Autumn Blaze,

"Yeah, come on, Autumn Blaze, show us what you can do." Sandbar said,

"Okay, here I go." Autumn Blaze replied, and she clears her throat,

"O Romeo, Romeo, wherefore art thou Romeo? Deny thee... Ah!" Autumn Blaze said, and she rolled her tongue around,

"Sorry, I messed up there." Autumn Blaze said, the bell rung a second later,

"Go on to yer next class, everyone." Applejack said, and they leave.

Autumn Blaze walked with Sandbar, Gallus, Ocellus, Yona, Smolder, and Silverstream,

"So, what are you guys?" Autumn Blaze asked,

"Don't you already know what we are?" Smolder asked,

"Only the pony and you, a dragon, I don't know what the other four are." Autumn Blaze replied,

"I'm a hippogriff, well, that's what I am now, this necklace I have here allows me to change into a seapony and swim underwater." Silverstream said,

"What's it to you?" Gallus asked,

"Just curious." Autumn Blaze replied,

"Then I'm not answering your question." Gallus said, bewildering Autumn Blaze,

"Yona yak." Yona said,

"And I'm a changeling, Gallus is a griffon, oh, and I'm Ocellus, by the way." Ocellus said,

"Okay, so you're Optimus, that's Yoda, that's Gala, I don't know the name of you three." Autumn Blaze said,

"Sandbar." Sandbar said,

"Smolder." Smolder said,

"And I'm Silverstream." Silverstream said,

"Oh, okay, so you're Sandlot, you're Smother, and you're Silversteam." Autumn Blaze replied,

"No, Silverstream, with an r." Silverstream said,

"It's Sand-bar, not Sandlot." Sandbar said,

"Yona is Yona, not Yoda." Yona said,

"My name is not Smother, it's Smolder!" Smolder said in an annoyed tone,

"I'm Gallus, I don't even know how you got Gala." Gallus said,

"My name is Ocellus, Autumn Blaze, not Optimus." Ocellus said,

"Look, I'm sorry, I'm still trying to pronounce words correctly after so many years of solitude." Autumn Blaze replied,

"Well, you better work on that, come on, Fluttershy's class is next." Sandbar said, Autumn Blaze smiled and ran to her class while excited.

Fluttershy was ready for her class and she hears running, Autumn Blaze entered the class,

"Fluttershy!"Autumn Blaze said excitedly and ran to her, the two hug one another,

"Hello, Autumn Blaze." Fluttershy said, and they let go, the other students come in,

"Stand here, Autumn Blaze, I have something to say to the class about you." Fluttershy said, and Autumn Blaze stood to her left while Fluttershy sat. The class enters and Fluttershy was ready to teach, everycreature was excited because Fluttershy was their favorite teacher,

"Hello, class, now before we begin, we're going to be talking about Autumn Blaze's kind, the kirins. Kirins are usually friendly creatures, but when angry, they turn into creatures of fire called niriks, the niriks burned down their village, and they were forced to take a vow of silence, so they don't burn their home down again." Fluttershy said,

"Don't get me started on that, it was so boring being silent, and when I got my voice back, I was banished, and couldn't do any of the plays, games, or whatever with my friends, I was forced into solitude for so many years, but I made several friends, which I couldn't bring to class, unfortunately, well, I did bring one, but it's always with me." Autumn Blaze said as she looked at her shadow,

"Have a seat, Autumn Blaze, it's class time." Fluttershy said, and Autumn Blaze sat with the class.

Fluttershy teaches the students on how to take care of animals, and how to calm them when they were scared or upset,

"What kind of animals do you have at your home, Autumn Blaze?" Sandbar asked,

"Well, we do have worms in apples, we also have squirrels, but other than that, I haven't seen any phone-a. Fawn. Fauna." Autumn Blaze replied,

"What is your home called?" Silverstream asked,

"Kirin Grove." Autumn Blaze replied,

"Come on, everycreature, let's have a game with the animals." Fluttershy said, the students cheer and learn by playing.

Autumn Blaze plays Battleship with a parrot and was losing,

"Ugh! I hate losing." Autumn Blaze said, and she plays again and loses, she lost every game she played with the parrot. Autumn Blaze growls and she grew fangs, and her eyes turn white with blue and purple fire above them. The students look at Autumn Blaze and Fluttershy becomes scared, she quickly flew to Autumn Blaze,

"Autumn Blaze, calm down, it's just a game." Fluttershy said, Autumn Blaze growls and lets out a scream, fire surrounds her and she changes to a nirik, scaring her classmates,

"Game or not, I hate losing." Autumn Blaze said in a distorted voice, she huffs and changes back to a kirin after calming down,

"What was that?" Silverstream asked,

"That was a nirik, everycreature, that is why you must not anger a kirin." Fluttershy replied,

"Think you can change into one, Ocellus?" Gallus asked,

"I'm not sure, changelings can't handle fire very well." Ocellus replied,

"Change back to a nirik, Autumn Blaze, I wanna try something." Smolder said,

"Sorry, but I can only change when I'm angry." Autumn Blaze said, and Smolder played Battleship with Autumn Blaze, she notices Smolder looking over the center part to see where Autumn Blaze's ships were at,

"What? Hey! You're cheating!" Autumn Blaze said,

"What are you going to do about it?" Smolder asked smugly, and she hits Autumn Blaze's ships off of the board with her left index finger,

"I win." Smolder said, Autumn Blaze growls and screams and changes into a nirik. Smolder flies into her fire and it scares her classmates, she flies out while on fire, the nirik fire goes out,

"Yes. Dragon scales are immune to nirik fire." Smolder said, but her scales turn black,

"Almost immune." Smolder said, everycreature saw Ocellus and Fluttershy's pet bugs were scared of Autumn Blaze's nirik form, Gallus and Silverstream were kind of scared as well, Autumn Blaze calmed down and changed back to a kirin, she sighs,

"Sorry about that." Autumn Blaze said,

"Ooh, Autumn Blaze, watch this." Silverstream said, and she uses her necklace to change into a seapony,

"Oh, cool, you can transform, too." Autumn Blaze said, Ocellus began changing into different things,

"Wow, I never knew other creatures can transform besides kirins." Autumn Blaze said,

"Yes, Autumn Blaze, hippogriffs can turn into seaponies to swim underwater, while changelings can change into almost anything." Fluttershy replied, much to Autumn Blaze's excitement, the bell rung afterwards,

"Class is over, see you all next time." Fluttershy said, and they all leave the class.

Autumn Blaze walks with Sandbar, Gallus, Ocellus, Yona, Smolder, and Silverstream,

"So, uh, when do we have the fun caste? Class?" Autumn Blaze asked,

"It's different everyday, we'll let you know when it is, Rainbow Dash's class is next." Sandbar replied,

"Is that the fun class?" Autumn Blaze asked,

"Well, her class is fun, but it's not the fun class." Ocellus replied,

"So, what do you guys think of me so far? And add as many complex words and phrases as possible." Autumn Blaze said,

"Well, for starters, your talkative attitude is really annoying." Gallus replied,

"I agree, you can be a bit annoying sometimes." Smolder said,

"Well, I do a lot of things for fun, you'll see them when that fun class comes." Autumn Blaze replied,

"Does kirin fun involve more than just talking?" Yona asked,

"Of course, I do a lot of things, I..." Autumn Blaze replied,

"We're here." Sandbar said, and Autumn Blaze saw the class, she groans with disappointment over not being able to talk about what she does for fun, and enters the classroom.

Rainbow Dash was ready to teach and saw Autumn Blaze enter with the others,

"Hello, everycreature, and Autumn Blaze, I'm Rainbow Dash, but you can call me Professor Egghead." Rainbow Dash said,

"Professor Egghead? *laugh*, Is that the name of your imaginary egg friend?" Autumn Blaze asked,

"No, it's what the students call me." Rainbow Dash replied,

"*laugh* oh, that is just too good." Autumn Blaze said, and she sighs and stops,

"Okay, I'm done." Autumn Blaze said,

"Alright, Autumn Blaze, since you're new here, we're going to learn loyalty, but before that, a little bit on myself, I am the coolest teacher in the school, and Wonderbolt certified." Rainbow Dash said,

"Wonderbolt? That sounds amazing, please tell me about them, and add in as much complicated phrases as you can, I really wanna hear about them." Autumn Blaze replied,

"You never heard of them?" Rainbow Dash asked,

"Um, no, I've been living in isolation until recently." Autumn Blaze replied,

"You didn't leave the forest to come here?" Rainbow Dash asked,

"No, even though Rain Shine banished me from Kirin Grove, she still wouldn't let me travel out that far." Autumn Blaze replied,

"Well, prepare to have your mind blown, Autumn Blaze." Rainbow Dash said, and she talks about the Wonderbolts while Autumn Blaze listens excitedly, some of the students began to fall asleep,

"Hey! We have a class to learn!" Smolder said, surprising Rainbow Dash and Autumn Blaze,

"Sorry about that, everycreature, I got carried away, and she's a fun one." Rainbow Dash said, Autumn Blaze smiled,

"Fun? More like annoying." Gallus replied,

"I don't find her annoying, I think she's a great addition to our school." Silverstream said,

"Well, come on, class, it's time to learn about teamwork." Rainbow Dash said, and she had the students build forts with desks. Autumn Blaze was teamed with Gallus and Ocellus, they build together and they see Autumn Blaze use her telekinesis to stack the desks, surprising the students,

"Kirin have telekinesis?" Silverstream asked excitedly,

"Yup, all of us do." Autumn Blaze replied,

"Can you shoot beams out of your horn, too, Autumn Blaze?" Ocellus asked,

"Can I see a demonstration?" Autumn Blaze asked, Ocellus shoots a green beam out of her horn, Autumn Blaze tries and could not, fire appears in her eyes and she grew fangs, she tries again and shoots fire out of her horn, burning the school. Rainbow Dash was alerted and quickly flies out of the window to get a rain cloud, she uses it to put the fire out,

"Try to stay calm, Autumn Blaze, Headmare Twilight will be furious if the school caught on fire." Rainbow Dash said,

"I'm sorry, but fire appears whenever I get mad." Autumn Blaze replied,

"Imagine a yak like that." Gallus said,

"Yak will burn down Yakyakistan if that was case." Yona replied,

"Yakyakistan?" Autumn Blaze asked,

"Yona's home, home of yaks." Yona replied,

"Don't you know the countries, Autumn Blaze?" Ocellus asked,

"Only Equestria and the Dragon Lands." Autumn Blaze replied,

"Wow, you've never heard of Griffonstone." Gallus said,

"Griffonstone?" Autumn Blaze asked,

"I'm from a hive, changelings don't have a country." Ocellus said,

"Well, I'm from two countries, Mount Aris and Seaquestria, Seaquestria's underwater, and only a few can visit." Silverstream said,

"Sorry, but I walk on top of water, I can't fall in it." Autumn Blaze replied,

"Wait, kirins walk on water?" Silverstream asked,

"Yup." Autumn Blaze replied, and she continues working with Gallus and Ocellus,

"So, Autumn Blaze, what did you do before you came here?" Ocellus asked, Autumn Blaze became sad,

"I don't think that's a good sign." Gallus said, Autumn Blaze explains being forced to be silent, regaining her voice, and then forced to live in isolation until she met Applejack,

"Wow, that's... quite a story, Autumn Blaze." Sandbar said,

"I know, I get surprised when I look back too, Sandlot. Bar. Bar." Autumn Blaze replied,

"Well, I'm sure you'll get your words right after sometime, but come on, Autumn Blaze, try to have some fun." Rainbow Dash said, and she tried, she did enjoy Rainbow Dash's class a bit until the bell rung,

"Class is dismissed, have fun, everycreature." Rainbow Dash said, and they all leave. Autumn Blaze walks through the hall and was impatient,

"Ugh, is the next class the fun class?" Autumn Blaze asked,

"After this one, Autumn Blaze, but Rarity's class is fun if you're into fashion." Ocellus replied,

"Fashion? Oh, I love fashion, I have many costumes for plays in my room, I got shirts, pants, dresses, masks, hats, you name it, I've also been imagining how you guys will look in my costumes, oh, I think you guys will look great and..." Autumn Blaze said and she began to rant,

"Ugh, kirin is being annoying again!" Yona said,

"Really? I'm enjoying this." Silverstream replied,

"Yeah, I like this, too, let her continue." Sandbar said,

"No way, having Silverstream like this is bad enough." Smolder replied,

"I agree, we don't need a second one." Gallus said,

"But she's been lonely and isolated for years, so we can't really blame her." Ocellus replied, and Autumn Blaze continued talking about fashion and her costumes, and then her plays,

"We're here, Autumn Blaze." Sandbar said, and she stops speaking and enters Rarity's class with the others.

Everycreature sits and Rarity was ready to teach,

"Welcome, class, I see we have a new student, and if you don't know me, my name is Rarity, and I teach students to share and make fashion." Rarity said,

"Wow, I like fashion, I'm Autumn Blaze, and I brought my play's costumes here and..." Autumn Blaze said, and she goes on and on about her costumes, their colors, and the materials she used to make them,

"Autumn Blaze, darling, I don't have all day for this, so please stop." Rarity said,

"Oh, I like that word, daring, darning, danning, ugh, I can't get it." Autumn Blaze replied,

"Anyway, let's get on with class, make your outfits, and make sure to share." Rarity said, and they do. Autumn Blaze makes an outfit and was having fun, she had memories of when she made costumes for her plays, she messes up and growls, the students become scared and go over to calm her, and they were able to, Autumn Blaze messes up again a few minutes later and growled, she changed into a nirik and was on fire. Rarity screamed with shock since Autumn Blaze was right beside her fabrics for making outfits, she quickly uses her telekinesis to put water on Autumn Blaze, it did not douse her fire, Sandbar, Ocellus, and Silverstream go over to calm her and they did. Rarity screamed again when she saw Autumn Blaze has burned some of her fabrics,

"Autumn Blaze!" Rarity said sternly,

"Sorry, sorry, I change into a nirik whenever I get mad, the madder I get, the stronger my fire will be." Autumn Blaze replied,

"Well, control it, you burning my outfits is the last thing I need." Rarity said, and she walked away. The students continue and Autumn Blaze runs out of sewing thread, Sandbar gave her more,

"Oh, thank you." Autumn Blaze said, and she continues, another student runs out of the same color thread Autumn Blaze was using, so she uses her telekinesis to give her sewing thread to that student,

"Thank you." the student said,

"You're welcome." Autumn Blaze replied, and she continues sewing while humming a tune, it bothered some of the students, Yona growled while Gallus and Smolder covered their ears',

"Uh, Autumn Blaze, your humming is annoying some of the students." Ocellus said, Autumn Blaze groaned with disappointment and stopped humming, Autumn Blaze finishes her first outfit, it was a light yellow gown with a light blue ribbon tied on the back of the waist, the skirt was went down to the floor, and the gown had dark white transparent drapes on the front legs, Autumn Blaze noticed Smolder taking a liking to the dress, but looked away in embarrassment when Autumn Blaze looked at her,

"My, Autumn Blaze, what an exquisite outfit." Rarity said,

"Thanks, I'm not done, dough. Though." Autumn Blaze replied, and she makes a replica of it and uses telekinesis to put it on her shadow, Rarity screamed again,

"Autumn Blaze! What are you doing?!" Rarity asked,

"This one's for my shadow, Silhouette Gloom of the Sundown Lands would get jealous if I was the only who had one." Autumn Blaze replied, confusing the students,

"Okay, I don't know why you're friends with your own shadow." Rarity said,

"What do you guys think of my new costume?" Autumn Blaze asked,

"Costume?!" Rarity asked,

"Yeah, it's for the newest play I wrote." Autumn Blaze replied,

"Autumn Blaze, these outfits are for fashion shows, not plays." Rarity said,

"Oh, come on, can you make an exception this time, please, Charity?" Autumn Blaze asked,

"It's Rarity, darling, but now that you mention it, my outfits are used for plays sometimes, so I'll let it slide." Rarity replied, Autumn Blaze ran to Rarity and hugged her, which made Rarity yelp,

"Yay! I knew you'd come through." Autumn Blaze said, and she ran back to her work station.

Autumn Blaze puts on the first dress she made while she puts her other dress to the side, she begins to stand on her hind hoofs and walks slowly,

"Dancing bears. Painted wings. Things I almost remember. And a song someone sings. Once upon a December. Someone holds me safe and warm. Horses prance through a..." Autumn Blaze sang,

"AUTUMN BLAZE!! This is not the class for that!" Rarity said angrily, startling her and messing her up,

"Aw, you messed up the mood." Autumn Blaze said,

"Just get back to work, and if you're done, clean up your work station." Rarity said, and Autumn Blaze looked down and cleaned up her work station for the rest of class, the bell rung twenty minutes after Autumn Blaze finished cleaning,

"Go to your last class, darlings." Rarity said, and they left.

Autumn Blaze trots excitedly in the hall and was ready for her last class,

"Next class is the fun class, right?" Autumn Blaze asked,

"That's right, Autumn Blaze, I think you're going to enjoy this one." Sandbar replied, and they all go to their last class.

Pinkie Pie was ready to teach and the students sat,

"Hello, everycreature, and we have a new student, you know what that means? New student welcome party!" Pinkie Pie said excitedly, and she had her party cannon ready, and many party things such as balloons, streamers, confetti, cake, ice cream, chips with dip, and soda. Autumn Blaze was excited and grateful, she tries all of them and everycreature saw Autumn Blaze actually had a pretty big appetite, but they all partied until everything was gone,

"Okay, new student, my name is Pinkie Pie, and we're going to have so much fun together!" Pinkie Pie said excitedly, Autumn Blaze chuckles, she already liked Pinkie Pie,

"Okay, Autumn Blaze, spotlight's on you all day today, so tell us what you do for fun." Pinkie Pie said, Autumn Blaze was excited and went up,

"Okay, I write plays, design costumes, brew tea, draw, paint, carve, play music, and sing, have I ever told you guys how much I love singing, I can do every female opera and choir voice there is, I could go on all day about this, the deepest one for female is contralto, it is as loud as a male's highest singing voice, next is mezzo-soprano, that one's in the middle, and the highest is soprano, which is my favorite, cause it makes my voice loud for everybody to hear." Autumn Blaze said,

"Ooh, let's hear it." Pinkie Pie replied, the other students agree. Autumn Blaze sings in a soprano voice and the class cheered,

"Moving on, I also have a lot of friends, I'm friends with my shadow, an apple, rocks, and other inanimate objects, we like sharing conversations with one another, one of my favorite ones was when I had a conversation with my hoof about who the faster runner is, me or my hoof, and we tried a race and it was a tie, can you all believe it? A tie." Autumn Blaze said,

"Yes, yes we can." Smolder replied in a bored tone,

"I also love parties, I haven't had a party in so long, due to the kirin having to be silent, my birthday wasn't celebrated, it's been so long, and I'm already planning to make a party to celebrate all of my birthdays that have been missed due to the vow of silence we took." Autumn Blaze said, Pinkie Pie appeared in front of her with party cannon,

"I've got my special party cannon for the occasion." Pinkie Pie said,

"Ooh, ooh. Are you going to have seashell necklaces there?" Silverstream asked,

"I've made necklaces before, but never seashell ones." Autumn Blaze replied,

"I can teach you how to make them." Silverstream said,

"Sure, I'd like to know, another thing I'd like to do one day is..." Autumn Blaze said and she went on and on, Gallus and Smolder covered their ears' while Yona screamed, going insane from the conversation between Pinkie Pie, Silverstream, and Autumn Blaze,

"This is too much, even for me." Ocellus said,

"Yeah, me too." Sandbar replied, Autumn Blaze continues conversing with Pinkie Pie and Silverstream to the point of annoying the other students,

"And then, there was one time, Terramar, that's my little brother, by the way, threw me a birthday party and he got me the wrong present, he was embarrassed by it, you should've seen how red his face was, it was so funny." Silverstream said, Pinkie Pie and Autumn Blaze laugh,

"Well, that's enough, come on, Autumn Blaze, let's hear you play an instrument." Pinkie Pie said,

"Oh, I love playing instruments, the piano's my favorite." Autumn Blaze replied, and Pinkie Pie got her ten instruments, and to everycreature's surprise, Autumn Blaze knew how to play all of them, and she was great,

"Your playing sounds like a dog coughing up a furball." Gallus said,

"Hey!" Autumn Blaze said angrily, she had fire in her eyes and grew fangs,

"Hey, hey, I'm just kidding, you're actually great." Gallus said, Autumn Blaze calmed down,

"What else you got, Pinkie Pie?" Autumn Blaze asked,

"Kite flying!" Pinkie Pie replied excitedly, Autumn Blaze became excited and Pinkie Pie took everycreature outside.

Autumn Blaze flies a kite shaped like a fireball and was having fun,

"Ah, this brings back memories." Autumn Blaze said,

"Of what?" Ocellus asked,

"Of how much I used to fly kites back at home before we became silent." Autumn Blaze replied,

"Isn't it exciting?" Pinkie Pie asked,

"Yes, yes it is." Autumn Blaze replied, and everycreature has fun until the bell rung,

"Class dismissed, have a good and fun day, everycreature." Pinkie Pie said, and everycreature went home while Sandbar, Gallus, Ocellus, Yona, Smolder, and Silverstream went to their dorms.

Autumn Blaze was in her dorm and sat on her couch and brewed tea with her telekinesis, she liked the school overall, but wished to get along with everybody, knocking was heard at her door and Autumn Blaze was excited, she trots to the door and opens it, she saw Sandbar, Gallus, Ocellus, Yona, Smolder, and Silverstream,

"Hi, guys." Autumn Blaze said,

"Hi, Autumn Blaze, we just thought we'd come over and see what you do for fun." Sandbar replied,

"I only came because my friends were coming." Gallus said,

"Yeah, me too." Smolder said,

"Yona only came cause Yona's friends wanted to go." Yona said, Autumn Blaze looked down at the fact those three did not want to see her,

"Can we come in?" Ocellus asked,

"Of course, make yourselves at home." Autumn Blaze replied, and she lets the six enter,

"Ooh, is that a tea brewer?" Silverstream asked,

"Yup, made it myself." Autumn Blaze replied, and she gives everycreature a cup of tea, they all have a sip,

"Wow, this is delicious, Autumn Blaze." Sandbar said,

"It's alright, taste's a little too strong for me." Ocellus said,

"This no taste like yak tea! Yak tea is best!" Yona said angrily, Autumn Blaze became worried when she saw Yona looked ready to trash her room, but she calmed down,

"This tastes really good." Silverstream said,

"What is this? Tastes like dishwater." Smolder said,

"It's good, for a dirty water taste tester." Gallus said, Autumn Blaze was offended,

"Sorry, he's always like that." Ocellus said,

"Then why do you all continue to be his friend?" Autumn Blaze asked,

"Because he has a good heart underneath." Silverstream replied,

"Oh." Autumn Blaze said with surprise,

"Well, come on, Autumn Blaze, show us what else you do." Sandbar said, and Autumn Blaze shows off her imaginary friends, her plays, her stories, her costumes, her board games, her jigsaw puzzles, her drawings, her paintings, her sheet music, her wood carvings, and her own recipes for cooking,

"Wow, Autumn Blaze, you have a lot of hobbies." Sandbar said,

"Had to keep myself occupied so I wouldn't go insane from isolation and loneliness." Autumn Blaze replied,

"So, how was your first day?" Ocellus asked,

"Great, I think I'm going to love this school." Autumn Blaze replied, the students smile,

"Great! I hope we get along." Sandbar said,

"Me too." Autumn Blaze replied,

"Who was your favorite teacher? Ours is Fluttershy." Silverstream said,

"Sorry, but I'm going to have to say Pinkie Pie." Autumn Blaze replied,

"How about out of the six of us, which one of us do you like the most?" Smolder asked,

"Easy, Silverstream." Autumn Blaze said, Silverstream squealed,

"You got my name right!" Silverstream said happily,

"Yeah, pronouncing words is getting a bit easier for me already." Autumn Blaze replied,

"Well, do you still want to try a tongue twister?" Gallus asked,

"Sure." Autumn Blaze replied,

"Okay, here goes. Peter Piper picked a peck of pickled peppers." Gallus said,

"Peter Piper picked a peck pep... Peter Picker, argh. Peter Piper picked a pee... ugh! Peter Piper picked a peck of pumpkin." Autumn Blaze said, she began to growl and fire appeared in her eyes,

"Why can't I get it right?!" Autumn Blaze asked angrily, the six students calm her down,

"Maybe you should wait until you can fully pronounce words again." Sandbar said,

"Yeah, you're probably right." Autumn Blaze replied,

"There's a lot of things here in Ponyville, you should check it out." Sandbar said,

"I will when I have the time." Autumn Blaze replied,

"Well, we must go now, Yona wish to be better friends in future." Yona said,

"Me too, bye now." Autumn Blaze replied, and they left. Autumn Blaze slept a few hours later and woke up the next day, she yawns and stretches, she takes a shower, has breakfast, and brushes her teeth, she saw that she has woken up early and hours before class started, so she decided to go out and explore Ponyville to see what it had to offer.

Comments ( 45 )

Interesting, nice to see more fics with her in them! Liked the manic nature you captured

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Thanks, it was actually a little hard for me since there's only one episode of her so far, so I can't interpret her personality completely.

This was quite nice and Autumn Blaze is great. The shout outs were also funny.

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Thank you, which shout out was your favorite?

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I don't have a favourite and I'm not sure I caught all of them.

What I want to point out in this fic is try to shorten Autumn's name when characters speak hear name. Try and shorten it. It makes it feel less repetitive.

So Rain Shine finally dumps Autumn Blaze on someone else, that could be taken as an act of war!

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I could be friends with her.

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In my story involving her, I just made her a girl who obsessively likes everything, but has a short temper (Driving, being called a Nirik).

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I can see Autumn Blaze having a short temper, that is why I made her dislike losing games in my story.

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If someone cut her off when she was driving... yeah. I would want to see that. Gotta hand it to ya, you got her perfectly.

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Thanks, it was a little hard for me since there's only one episode of her, but I've been seeing signs she might be a breakout character, and might appear more in season 9.

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Well, she's easily my favorite now unless they ruin her.

Loved this story! :pinkiehappy:
Can you make a sequel?

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I wasn't planning to, but I can try.

Autumn Blaze doesn't so easily get angry, is she? Author You wrote too many times she was angry.It's a bit out of line. No offense!:duck:

This story is very interesting and exciting, I have not read anything so amazing for a long time. I would also like to create such masterpieces, but at school, I realized that it was not mine. That's why I read a lot of different reviews on essayexplorer.com in search of service with low prices and edusson is just my ideal. So I am incredibly glad that there are people with a gift like yours.

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Thank you, it's probably from practice, I've been creating my own stories since 2010.

While some things start to get really repetitive after a while, this story overall was still a lot of fun and pretty cute. Autumn was great and the connections she makes with the students for the most part feel really genuine, especially Silverstream. The classes were all rather creative and It'd be cool to see more of her reactions to Ponyville in some kind of sequel if you were interested, good job with this fic! :twilightsmile:

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Thanks, I haven't had thoughts of a sequel yet, and I'm busy working on another story right now.

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Awesome, what’s it about?

I'll try to upload it soon, don't wish to give spoilers, I'm working on the last chapter.

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Sounds good, best of luck!

Great story. You captured the Autumn Blaze 's personality well.

"Okay, so you're Optimus, that's Yoda, that's Gala, I don't know the name of you three." Autumn Blaze said,

Lol 😆 Optimus prime master yoda Grand galloping gala lol oh Autumn blaze you funny 😆

"I don't find her annoying, I think she's a great addition to our school." Silverstream said,

I feel like silverstream and autumn blaze Have more in common with each Both of them are very talkative creatures I guess because they been in hiding or in solitary

Autumn Blaze noticed Smolder taking a liking to the dress, but looked away in embarrassment when Autumn Blaze looked at her

Ohh Looks like smolder love the dress that autumn blaze did

"Sure, I'd like to know, another thing I'd like to do one day is..." Autumn Blaze said and she went on and on, Gallus and Smolder covered their ears' while Yona screamed, going insane from the conversation between Pinkie Pie, Silverstream, and Autumn Blaze,

oh sweet Celestia When you put those 3 together there's nothing to stop them from talking a long time lol :pinkiehappy: And again I knew that autumn blaze will love pinkie pie and silver stream Because all 3 of them have in common with each other they love to talk 🤣

OK so basically her 1st day of school for autumn blaze went pretty well even though there are some bumps on the road and I'm sure Gallus Smolder and yona Will give her a chance I mean you had to give her a break She Was silent for a very long time And this is the 1st time she ever talk to anybody other than her animate objects Plus she felt lonely but at least sandbar ocellus and silverstream Became Friends with her pretty well She's probably needs to learn how to control her emotion better but This was a pretty good story I was sort of hoping we will see more of her How she been doing in school But whatever you do that's up to you this was a good story keep up the good work

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Sorry this comment is a bit late, I was busy on another website. I have thought about doing a sequel several times, but I haven't been able to come up with anything yet, just bits and pieces so far, I'll see if I can make one in the future.

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Hey that's okay I'm sure you've been pretty busy and that would be pretty cool to see a story like this whatever you do take your time

Would it be something if the story converted to an episode for season 9?

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I actually thought about that when I first typed this one.

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Well, it can be for the season 9 2.0 revision as episode 3. Anyway, can you shorten Autumn's name so it won't be less repetitive, not to mention fix your grammar? You could've written Spike having a fantasy of marrying Rarity and their children look like kirins, after Autumn told him, she's half-pony, half-dragon. I hope you write a fic where Autumn Blaze tours Ponyville, and the young 6 take on a hot air balloon trip to their homelands, and she shows her friends the peaks of parol.

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To tell you the truth, I typed this story before I was given tips and pointers on how to improve making a story, this is also before I got a grammar check I can use online. I've also been a little conflicted on whether I should go back through my old stories and make them typed like my newer ones, or keep them as they are so I can see my own growth and improvements when I look back on them.

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Have you ever tried Grammarly?

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Well, you should.

You know, you never wrote about Autumn in Twilight and Starlight's classes.

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I didn't think they were teachers at the time I typed this, I thought they were just headmaster and counselor respectively.

Since I'm a member a the save mlp campaign, I've been talking to the leader about Hasbro adapting your story into an episode for the season 9 revision.

Peter Pony picked a pack of perfect peonies. A pack of perfect peonies Peter Pony picked. If Peter Pony picked a pack of perfect peonies, where's the pack of perfect peonies Peter Pony picked?

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