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ROBCakeran53


Ladies and Gentlemen, take my advice. Pull down your pants and slide on the ice.

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Autumn Blaze enters the Iron Pony gymnastics challenge to show everypony just what she's got.

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While I am a judge, I cannot really compete in the Fimfiction Feghoot Festival, but I had to write something. So I figured, what the hell. If you haven't heard of this competition yet, then click those link thingies and check it out! This story should be an example of what not to do for the competition, and should hopefully make you all hate me just a little bit more.

Savagely edited at an unspeakable hour by the amazing Fregz!

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Comments ( 21 )

This contest was a mistake.

The levels of groan are exceeding expected results.

~Skeeter The Lurker

:ajbemused: How did I not see that coming? :facehoof:

“Oh that would be delightful! I’d love to see Fluttershe again.”

“Shy.”

“Fluttersheshy!”

That portion was adorable. :twilightsmile: There aren't enough Autumn Blaze stories. :pinkiehappy:

Autumn's routine sounded pretty cool, and I like how you utilized her fire. I didn't get what the pun was at the end though. :rainbowhuh:

I would shame you thoroughly, but this is unnecessarily funny, so I shall only shame you lightly.

Yes nice punchline indeed mate.
Quite meta :ajsmug:
The only meta story I've seen in this competition so far.

The structure of that ending implies to me that there is a joke in there somewhere, but I don't see it....:rainbowhuh:

This fic reminded me of how much I love Autumn Blaze.

I hope she makes another appearance before the end of the show.

Oh.

Oh.

You jerkbutt, I groaned so much at that last line. :rainbowkiss:

People are talking about some sort of bad joke near the end. I don't get it.

The rest of the story, though, was cute. I bet Mud Briar (Maud's BF) was quite interested in this performance.

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The joke is that Super Trampoline is hosting a Feghoot writing competition. Autumn performed her "Super Trampoline Fighoof extravaganza.

It's meta as all hell. I'm just waiting for ST to actually read and kick me off from a judge position.

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I knew a mention of Super Trampoline was coming for sure, especially given the cover art, but I still had a laugh when I saw how it all played out at the end.

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I may now die with peace.

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bby don’t go towards the light.

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goddammit

We’re all forty-five.

Same.

Hilariously enjoyable.

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Get off muh lawn! >:V

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