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Romance in the camp

Luna and Twilight are going camping, each one bringing their stuff to the camp. Who knew the camp would make the friendship of Twilight and Luna go beyond friendship?

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Historylover #1 · Feb 3rd, 2019 · · ·

Amazing story

TheAncientPolitzanian

TheAncientPolitzanian #2 · Feb 4th, 2019 · 4 · ·

There's a neat little fluff fic somewhere in here, but it's hidden under a bunch of grammatical errors.

In particular, you keep shifting between tenses, sometimes even mid-sentence. If the tense issues were cleaned up, this would get a like from me.

But, for now,
No Opinion. :|

Twinkle_Shine #3 · Aug 1st, 2019 · · ·

Um Luna would not confess her love to Twilight early, it should have been looking at the night sky

Plus the night sky is the PERFECT place to confess feelings

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