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Everypony loves Hearth’s Warming Eve, especially youngsters who are looking forward to receiving their presents. But without Santa being around, who is going to deliver them?

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“It looks like the naughty list is surprisingly short this year: most of the fillies and colts have been niece. Lucky me!”

Niece? Well, that's new... :unsuresweetie:

“Welcome to Canterlot Carousel!” A sweet, gentle voice said. “I'm a Sassy Saddle and I will be your shop assistant, please ask me anything you may...Princess Luna?!” The red-maned mare shrieked, as soon as she realised who the pony in front of her was.

Okay, we get the idea that Sassy Saddles is only one of a kind...

“As I was saying to you dear colleague, I come out of the palace for the mere pleasure of spending time with my beloved subjects, furthermore I am in need of a particular accessory and I was hoping I could find it here. I hear yours is the most successful shop in the whole city.”

Perhaps you meant "your dear colleague"?

“Ah!” Poor Luna exclaimed yawing after the hard night she had just had.

Yawing? More like yawning...

“Happy Heart's Warming, Luna! Ready to open your gift?” Unluckily for her, Celestia would need to lose her heart about opening gifts with Luna, for her sister was already asleep.

I'm pretty sure it's Hearth's Warming...

And in the title, you missed the 'm' of 'Warming'...

Even though there were a lot of typos here & there, it still was a heart-warming story. Have a great Hearth's Warming Eve! :heart: (Hope I wasn't too rude in pointing out the mistake. If I was, then I'm sorry :ajsleepy:)

Crystal Out! xxxx

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