Summer has finally come and the school doors are locked. Having decided not to pass time turning their thumbs all day. The girls from CHS decide to head to the mall to find a summer job which will help them gather up some greens for a trip to the beach they have in mind. Too bad that the only jobs they find will will get them into serious trouble.
This story has been completely edited by the amazing Princess Crystal Bunny who I will never stop thanking for her amazing help. Without her this fan fiction would not be as awesome.
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Great shot at the backstory of all the summer time videos released by Hasbro! Just a suggestion : You need an editor. There are mistakes in your story & if you correct them up, your story is awesome! If you don't find an editor, I can edit this story for you, if you don't mind. You've got really good idea for this story & I'm looking forward to reading more! :3 xxxx
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Sure. What should I correct?
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You can message me in private if you prefer
*meow*
Since this is EqG the CMC should be identified as the Canterlot Movie Club, but other then that a good story. Just get an editor to clean it up a little and it should be golden.
I approve of this Fan Fiction.
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Thanks for the tip, I'll be sure to fix that mistake up
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Thanks for the tip. I'll be sure to correct that mistake right away.
Error I keep seeing by many authors on this site: costumer instead of customer.
As I have said before, you really need an editor. Try to find one in the group : Looking For Editors. I'll be glad to fix your story but I'll take a long time as I'm on vacation & viewing FIMFiction on my mobile (I like editing through computer...just feeling comfortable like that
). Good luck! xxxx
This is certainly intriguing.
And Applejack you silly girl.
how can you of all people be late?!
I think you meant “let it out”, because it really sounds wrong if you leave it?
And poor Pinkie.
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Guess the song: “ we’re not flawless” speaks the truth
Vinyl Scratch and Pinkie Pie. If either of those two don't know what is going on, then no one in Canterlot City does.
You said it!
One typo, but you did it twice: reice instead of race
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