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TheGamerBrony


Hello there, everypony! My name is GamerBrony, everypony's favorite videomaking (and storywriting) pony!

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The holiday season has come once again at Twilight Sparkle's School of Friendship. Everyone is having a good time celebrating the holidays with their friends...everybody except for Gallus who is reminded of his tragic past every time the holiday season nears. This year, it has become too much for the poor griffon and he runs away from the school. It is now up to the rest of the Young Six to find their missing friend. Will they find him before it's too late?

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I..I...I *runs to the blue griffon and gives him the biggest hug he ever received* MY LITTLE SMOL GRIFFON I GOT YOU!!!!

The flow of the story is very blunt and fast paced.

Although I liked the story (especially with the GalluStream moment at the end), the story was moving too quickly. My advice is to slow down a bit, but despite that, it was nice.

Sandbar, now very worried about his friend, responded “Why on Earth would you say that?!”

Inner Mudbriar says, "Technically, they live in Equestria."

“Maybe he went to the real world.” said Silverstream.

Since when can Silverstream fourth wall-break? :applejackunsure:

The five students ran to the Everfree Forest in search for Gallus. The Everfree Forest is an eerie-looking place with many things that would hurt or even kill if one is not careful. The forest is dark and inhabits many dangerous creatures, such as timberwolves, dragons, spiders, etc. The group went into the forest, very scared of what they will encounter.

You are aware that Smolder is a dragon, right? :applejackunsure:

“Gallus, sweetie, we would never exclude you. That’s your old life. Now you have friends who love and care for you. I would never see my life without you. I’m glad that you’re mine.” said Silverstream before kissing him on the cheek. A flash of pink shone on Gallus’ blue cheeks.

I 🚢 it. :rainbowkiss:

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