Based on Argodaemons Remembrance. Also using Ashley H's audio Drama. Link to hers below. Have permission to do this as well.
"Becoming a Alicorn wasn't the hard part. Its watching everypony you love die. Knowing you will never see them again."
For thirty years, these thoughts have haunted Twilight Sparkles mind. Thirty years to the day she lost the last of her friends.
Now, after coming across the Nightmare, a century after defeating it the first time. She comes to a realization with the help of the other princesses, if it gets a host. They cant stop it.
The elements of harmony, once bright beacons of light now lay dull, cracked and broken as she cant wield the last gift of her friends. A trip to Ponyville will lead Twilight back to the past. To help rediscover the elements.
But what if it's already too late?
Promising start.
There are a few grammar and punctuation errors here and there, but nothing too glaring or enough to pull you out of the story.
Shame Twilight is dealing with grief in this manner. This is precisely the kind of thing that Celestia, as her mentor, should be good for in terms of advice. I can only hope Mi Amore "Best Princess" Cadenza can help.
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Trust me, I’ve seen the YouTube series Remembrance, I think that’s gonna be a problem,
Please tell me more about Remembrance.
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Will be working on it again soon. My carpeltunnel started to be bothering me at the end. Was originally going to write the whole of what was left in the episode, but it as starting to hurt to type. Theres probably about 3-4k words left
Got even when written, the Rembrance series... ALWAYS MAKES ME CRY!!!!
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You think its bad now, wait til later. Especially with episode 2 and episode 4. I know Ive added more to each scene, but its easier to express stuff in written form then actually shown.
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I DID’T SAY ITS A BAD THING!!!!!!
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I know ^^