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Nira Lightshine


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Remembrance


Summary: If you had to choose between friendship and forever? What would you decide?

One hundred years…one hundred years had passed since the last time Twilight had seen any of her friends in the flesh. It had been even longer since she had last seen the mare that captured her heart. Now, she goes to the vault of harmony and friendship, despite Celestia warning her not to do something irreversible. Something which she hopes will reunite them all, regardless of consequences or cost.

Remembrance posted with permission by Argodaemon, based on the Remembrance video.

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I loved this good job.

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Tyvm for the comment :)

Historia była świetna! Uwielbiałem rozwój postaci i sposób przejścia między scenami! Twój opis mnie uszczęśliwił i mam nadzieję, że dobrze! Upewnij się, że nie włożysz sosu do pralni!

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Właśnie tłumaczą to, co powiedziałeś. Dziękuję za miłe słowa :)

Having written my own variant of this story, I am impressed by this. Your telling of the expanded version of the video is quite lovely and more confronting of the personalities involved than mine was. I didn't include Cadance or Luna in mine, just Celestia and Stellar. So... Bravo. I just wish I could give you more than one up-vote; it deserves a hundred.

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Thanks I had the idea too about throwing them in after watching Ashley H's audio drama about it. But i dont know who Stellar is fyi.

8658666 Stellar Light Sparkle is an OC who is Twilight's twin sister (Not a very original concept, but original character.)

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Ya I went and read your version and I liked it too.

8658889 Thanks. Yours might be a bit more... complete, in how it explored the ramifications with the other alicorns, but i was putting it from Stellar's POV, watching as her beloved sister puts everything on the line to bring back her friends.

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I was originally going to include Starshine who is a alicorn/changeling hybrid oc of mine whos the daughter of Flurry Heart and Thorax but decided against it as it spoils a huge thing to a story of mine Im writing.

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Want to see the side story summary for soemthing involving my oc?

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Sure. I also do the occasional proof-reading, too.

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Sending it in a message to you.

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