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Forge


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When the world seems to be against you, how do you find a place where you belong? Forge has had that problem for as long as he can remember. Due to his special "gifts", everypony believed him to be a monster and were terrified of him. However, after getting caught up in the storm of the century, he finds himself in Ponyville where his luck begins to turn. But how long will it last?

Rated Teen for mild language.

Please comment on the story as it progresses. Constructive criticism is appreciated.

Chapters (11)
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Comments ( 61 )

Bwuh? Abilities..... Hmmmmm.... Ok you got me to track.

I can't come up with anything clever to say... So I'll just say I'm excited to see where this goes.

Take some Pinkies.:pinkiesmile::pinkiehappy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiesmile:

Ponies with fire powers shall always be the epitome of bad ass in all things pony.

when you said dragon.. i was all like fuck.. then i realized i wasn't playing skyrim. :applejackconfused:

Hope it goes well for Forge from now on! Keep up good work!

not entirely sure how his magic works buuuuuttt... i can just see it now one accidental (sp?) sneeze and the barn is lit on fire. good story tracking

So he's a Pegasus with the power of FIYAAAAAAAAA?

Post the next chapter now

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Hold your horses. (no pun intended) I'm working on it.

Though I liked this chapter, I want to know: If he wants to keep the fire a secret, why did he show Twilight without even doubting it?

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He showed Twilight because he trusts her and friends enough to show them. They haven't let him down yet.

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Oh, ok. I thought he meant absolutely nopony could know.

Oooooooo my shipping senses are tingling twitchy twitch twich

Yay another chapter!:twilightsmile:

Update faster...!:pinkiehappy:

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I'm updating as fast as I can. I'm still trying figure out where I'm going to go in each chapter while balancing school at the same time. I'll try and update faster but I can't make any promises.

First and make him beat rainbow in the race

so help me god if gilda hurts any of them i will turn her into a celestia damned fried chicken dinner that would make KFC seem like CRAP
ever tried lightning roasted griffon?:pinkiecrazy:
i might be able to soon:pinkiecrazy:
:pinkiecrazy:-evil grin-:pinkiecrazy:

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Personally, I prefer my chicken extra crispy.

Bitch gonna burn. Also, Zephy needs his own tag. He appears so often.

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its on the house then
HEY LION LARD! OVER HERE
-gilda tries to tackle me as i fly into the air and summon enough lightning to make zeus feel like a pussy-
BITCH! WE GONNA GET CHEEEKEN!
-zaps her so much and turns her into a giant stack of extra extra crispy chicken that even a pony would love-
problem solved

damit how is zeph in all this storys i swear at this rate he will be a backroun pony in the show

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Thanks guys!
Now I seriously think about sending a mail to an admin about that own tag...


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*thoughts when seeing Forge in flames*

'FIRE! FIRE! IT BURNS! BUUUURNSSS!!!!! EVERYTHING IN FIRE!!!! HAHAHAHAHAAAAAAAA!!!!'

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I'd do it. Your probably going to be in more stories anyway.

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You bet it!

Actually, there is two more where I could appear anytime now...

Anytime....

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Wow! Your just insanely popular! What's your secret?

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Well.. I don't know!

If I think about it, I have no idea why I got this popular.
But I'm not complaining, I like to be everywhere! :pinkiehappy:

Yay, an update!:pinkiehappy:

I am terribly sorry to hear of your family member passing.:fluttercry: I will keep you and your family in my thoughts and prayers.

.....WHO WANTS GRIFFIN NUGGETS?!?!?!?!:pinkiecrazy:

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Thank you. That means a lot. Hope you enjoyed the chapter.

Lightning Streak.....you do realize.....that USED to be my account when i first joined....coincidence?
i think NOT!

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Really? Oops. I just took the name from one of the background Wonderbolts in an episode.

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lol, s'all good, at least my old name is in a story i love
and as for the KFG thing, i trried some, aand its DAWUM gud

For the sake of every color, the mane is royal-blue not violet!!!

And I would never celebrate like that....

Gaaahhhh....

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I did! I can't wait for the next chapter!:twilightsmile:

Poor Rainbow Dash :pinkiesad2: Gilda better get what she deserves!:flutterrage:

You know Forge... If I would meet with Gilda after this, I would gave her a nice buck right in her beak (breaking it obviously) and sending her 4 feet under the ground. With an impact.

Let's see if my masterplan can be acconplished... Heh, she can't even catch me, I'm too dodgy :D
(high-speed dodging cutiemark, get it?)

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Oh don't you worry Zephyr. You and I are going to have plenty of fun with Gilda in the next chapter! Mwah ha ha ha ha ha!

Finally, a new chapter! A good one, too!:pinkiehappy:

Keep up the good work, buddy.:twilightsmile:

*salutes Forge*

*starts to play this*

In Celestia We Trust

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Also, I wonder if Spitfire and Forge will start off where they were before and take their relationship to next level, as you have stated in last chapter in conversation that Soaring had with Forge about her being torn up when Forge left and wishing it was more.

Hm-hm even if I'm not the winner, sending Gilda in the air is satisfying enough.

Oh well, I guess I'll win next time then.

I'm not gonna lie for as cheesy as some of the dialogue was, this was still pretty fucking awesome. I only wish there was Kenny Loggins soundtrack, maybe Stan Bush.

Woohoo! Finally got the chapter up! :pinkiehappy:

"That does sound pretty good. Do they about your..."

I think there's a 'Know' in there somewhere

also , I've heard that 6 to 9 months thing somewhere....

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Thanks for spotting that.

Fixed.

my god
i want to cry
and also laugh
and strangle you
and hug you
damn you and your good writing!

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