• Published 30th Oct 2018
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Pony Ghosts - HeartfireFirebrand



Equestria is danger form an unseen threat, only Sunset Shimmer can save it.

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Comments ( 6 )

You Misspelled "trnafroming" upthere pal ^^"

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I can't find it, could copy the whole bit and highlight the mistake it please.

On Nightmare Night a strange wave of ectoplasm trnafroming poneis into ghost which in turn violently attack

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I thought you meant in the chapter, not the story description, thanks for telling me.

Sound like a nice concept for a ghost hunt/ hero story. But you should make your chapters longer pls. :raritywink:

And you got still same errors in your story description: transforming is still wrong ( you wrote transfroming) and you first ponies is spelled wrong. :twilightsheepish:

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