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Desperate Dawn
I'm not that Desperate, just to let you know.
Desperate Dawn
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Way too fast, went from 0-60 at a ridiculous rate.
Well......I've actually read worse clop, The real problem with this fic? The grammar is BAD.
Definitely needs a remodel, but you've got the right idea.
9120180
Thanks! I hope it wasn't shift to far off the bad side.
And shouldn't be Stallion's lasted less than a minute?
(I really don't get it)
9120188
Guess I literally mean it lol.
9120272
That's probably what you'll get from me, since I wrote stuff late night and does not have the time to get a Proofreader or an Editor. Also I'm not a fluent speaker of English, so yeah... Without an Editor or a Proofreader, I'm basically suck at Grammar.
(Maybe you can point out where it should be fix or changed?)
9121204
Definitely... But considering how busy I am, probably I don't have the time to reshape the story.
Well, guess that's all...
And don't expect me to reply immediately or a lot sooner, I barely had the time to rest.
Sunday you say? To bad, Sunday is my time to slack off and watch some Anime's.
But anyway, you won't be hearing me anytime soon.
So, farewell for now...
Till next time everypony, bye, have a great time!
-Desperate Dawn