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sunset was a bad person and was nice to laura in order to keep deluding herself that she is good.
It is funny since shimmerests are antihuman which means they would be anti human tech as well.
They are clear examples of how sunset failed.
Also I kind of hate phobia. She is acting all symphathetic but has admitted to sharing her mothers views but just wants to go slower.
Luna should set phobia straight.
the nurse has a viewpoint that should be the one twilight has.
TWILIGHT is pro transformed. She would be a helper to making a sunset shimmer 2.0.
the sad thing is the ones that claim that ponies are better than humans are actually the worst of humanity.
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You're actually the first person I have seen point out that fact about Phobia. It is best to call her a Shimmerist sympathizer though. Phobia is largely disinterested in such things and is mainly concerned about security for ponies--something she influenced her mother on. Without Phobia's cautions to her mother the south as a whole would have ended up much like the west and Sunset Blessing wouldn't be focused on the long game.
Phobia's new position that Luna is training her for is focused on one goal and matters involving Shimmerists, Lunites, Harmonists, the United States government and so on have no bearing on it.
I’m starting to like this story better then Pandemic Aftermath.
I like the more personal view of events. Still following both just liking your style more.
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Halira is definitely doing the slice of life story style more than I am in my story. My story is covering a greater breadth of events. While it does get into the personal feelings of the characters, it is not the sole focus of the story. It's been a pleasure collaborating with Halira. Halira is mostly responsible for fleshing out night pony lore, and we've been communicating to keep things in sync. The canon for my universe is still in the process of being established.
I think you mean Amanda there, not Amber, as it is Amber they are talking about.
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Good catch, fixing that.
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You're all forgetting one thing here. Sunset's goal was to have ALL Humanity changed. In that context, the ponies around the world would all feel like the Shimmerists, to some degree, and human tech would probably have fallen to the wayside, for the most part. She also didn't count on Crystal Ponies being in her mix, which really showed how much she didn't understand about what she was doing.
And right now, the Human government is concentrating far too much on turning Ponies back into Humans, and definitely not enough on those who are partially-transformed and want to finish their transformation, like Evan does. I bet Twilight could find a way to continue ETS in those who want to finish becoming Ponies, like he does.
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Oh I’m enjoying both. I just like the slice of life a bit better is all.
Kind of like choosing between two flavors of ice cream.
Thoughts:
1. If Rosetta can dreamwalk maybe she could work with Sarah through that? They could discuss details of Sarah's digs in Sarah's dreams and Rosetta could do research for Sarah and present it to her by dream. Sarah would have an interesting discussion about that with her fellow workers on site. "Yeah, I'll know all about X after I wake up. My researcher on the side gives me reports in my dreams."
2. Sunrise Storm got her name from Rosetta??
3. I lol'ed at Amber saying she wasn't going to have sex with Sunset Blessing.
4. Yes, your aunt's crazy Robby.
5. Interesting callback but isn't this the second time Rosetta wanted Luna to go #### herself? She's definitely no Lunite.
6. Wings still seem to be a strong draw of better to be a pony. Interesting that as soon as Evan sprouted his he was starting to look forward to finishing transformation. Kira was more attached to her humanity. Could just be coincidence.
When you say Tonya flew slowly, the word matched should be in the past tense.
There is no “D” in the word “An”
When they enter the building, the word “They” should be used. You missed they Y.
In that same sentence, the I in in has been upper-cased.
When Amber is asked whether she’s ready for the job, there is no punctuation at the end of the sentence.
Also, without checking it, is it me, or are all of these things I have been pointing out, or most of them either in the second or final scene in the chapter? And usually surrounding Tonya, it would appear.
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Tonya's messing with your mind...
Except for that "An" one. Would you mind highlighting that one for me a little better? Using my find on page option for that was a very bad idea.
You do not want to know what kind of random things my spellchecker wanted to do to this comment. It seems very fond of the word Tudor tonight for some reason and seems to want to replace every word with an O in it with Tudor.I really need a reliable CPU instead of a phone to write on. Maybe I'll look into that again later this week. Last computer just keep freezing after every word typed. Not very conductive to writing 3-6 thousand words a day.
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If Sunset Shimmer was still alive, it's likely she would have adjusted her vision of how ponies on Earth should structure their society to include the use of more technology, once she learned that there were aliens who fed on magic using civilizations and could only be defeated by technological means. And I suspect that if all humans had become ponies, the ponies would have had a far greater range of options than they currently do on how they should structure their societies, because they wouldn't have had to deal with hostile humans. This greater degree of freedom would, I believe, have made it easier for some ponies to continue to use the technologies they mastered as humans.
Mindrape a pony against their will, make them violate their strongest self-commitment to freakin commit murder, cry a bit later and then dance around and play the next day. It reminds me of the garden of eden story. The serpent tempts the woman to sin. Except Tonya managed to one-up the devil by mindraping number crunch as well. Then dances around later. That remorse she gave is meaningless. She should have channeled that hate on her lover. Told her off and left her to her forever lonliness to think about the atrocious monster she is. Tonya can never move past this until she exposes her lover for all that she is and admits the absolutely horrible thing she did to Number Crunch. Being a tool is no excuse for seeing that you manipulated someones greatest fears against them to commit murder. She is a horrible pony and facing it means doing something about it. Not pretending it didn't happen! That scene with Amber was fun though and I did enjoy that little quit dance thing :) Even if she is awful she is an interesting character.