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You aren’t from Equestria.
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Fixed, thank you.
I think there is a reason that the young seem to becoming leaders. Either Triss when she was messing with things or Sunset Shimmer thought that they would be easier to influence into her point of view.
Kind if conditions -> kind of conditions
selve -> seize
Maybe down the road the ponies who won the superpower roulette around the world can form a club down the line. They could all benefit from talking to each other. Knowing other ponies have to deal with great responsibilities too.
Reading this as I go, so no knowledge from later chapters of this story. Aftermath is read in full, though.
Being non-native, can be rude a bit - forgive me for that.
But, adult unmarked as they are set here - their very existence - edges on the very edge of acceptance from me.
Will try to clarify.
We know from the show that each and every of CMC had their own mark related nightmare. And we know how exactly Luna reassures them: 'it will be, indeed'. No even possible preparations for being adult blank flanks, like at all.
Bigotry appears when there is, however small but notable, population of ones to be unjustly pursued. Saying, LGBT have their share of 5-15%. They just are, and they are minority. They are target to bigotry, no question here.
If the population in question is extremely rare, edging on non-existence, as it appears to be (otherwise Luna would give the gentle warning to CMCs) - it just can not be target of bigotry. Curiosity, pity, means of healing and/or helping to include to the society. But no prejudice in that case. Nothing that deserves that comment from Luna in that other chapter.
Sorry, this somewhat minor detail (and I understand you can think otherwise, you did the awesome job) just really rubs me wrong way.