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Okay, that makes a bit more sense. Thank you.
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The Luna and Celestia headcanon you would need to speak to ASGeek2012 about. I handle Luna's portrayal as a Dreamwarden, but all matters of ascendency are dealt with by him, he is the sole gatekeeper on that.
I'm always happy to have background NPC characters suggested. Trying to come up with them can be a bit of a chore sometimes since I still write out for myself who they are, it's just important to me that every character I show is a character with a history, drives, personality, and so on whether they are important or not in the big narrative or if I actually tell those things. It helps make their actions and reactions more organic and you never know if I want to come back and give them a bigger role in the future.
On that note you might have noticed some characters who have gotten small bit roles but haven't gotten much time and attention given them. Many of these characters won't get their time to shine until part 2 but I needed them established early on. If you ever wonder why a character doesn't seem to be contributing much by existing currently that's the likely reason why. Tattered Wing's little brother Alex might be a good example of this, he just hasn't reached the point where he's important but I wasn't going to pull a Cadance and Shinning Armor introduction to him in part 2.
A little bit of a slowdown after the last few chapters.
Wonder how the Sunset Blessing-Sarah Tanner working relationship is going to go, and wonder how Sunrise Storm is going to react when she finally finds out who's paying her mother's bills. Better yet, how Bob will react since Sunset Blessing's goons threatened him. Sunset Blessing might not be a major power over in the west, but she still has her hooves in a lot of things.
And guessing Devon and Paul are going to be finding out a lot when it finally gets around to evening. Between Phobia putting her gmhoif down and telling the other dreamwardens that they are dealing with that kind of situation finally and Tonya confessing that should be one interesting talk.
Hopefully the next day goes faster. I like all the perspectives, but it takes forever to get through even one day of story. You hear something is hapoening in two days and then something days after that and you have to wonder how many more chapters before you actually get to the event. It's like a tease. How much time has actually passed so far in this story?
So how do you tell someone about Dream wardens? “Remember those Nightmare on Elm street movies? How Fready Kruger was immortal killing people in dreams? Dream Wardens are like that but can be in thousands of dreams at the same time. Basically don’t mess with them.”
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I've been keeping track of the internal passage of time in this story. This is day 6 since this story (Picking up the Pieces) began. When Wild Growth told Wendy that things had been a whirlwind, back in Chap. 37, she wasn't kidding.
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Phobia likes to take inspiration from a lot of modern horror monsters in her methods of discipline. Don't be surprised if she plays out a famous bed scene from Nightmare on Elm Street at some point, or borrows some things here and there from famous works of horror.
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The 1984 movie “Dreamscape” has physics entering dreams. Then a government official turns it into the an assassination program killing targets in dreams.
I would think they would have more problems with sunset blessing knowing. She will try to use the dreamscape to her advantage by using phoebia.