So remember when I was just suddenly in Equestria? Everything had gone to hell and I died from blood loss like half an hour after I got there? Yeah well, I'm alive again and in a different Equestria... and this one doesn't look too much better...
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Ah Sal you little naive boy, you don't even see the true danger here.
War with Abyssinia is the least of his worries, Sal is in a grimdark Equestria, meaning that something will happen that will result in a apocalyptic level event, these world end so corrupted that it spreads to other worlds, thus his mission to save the world or destroy it if it's beyond saving.
My guess is that Celestia gonna go full Daybreaker when she hears about this, and then she'll torch everyone.
I wonder when Sal will realize that Discord gave him a small portion of his power. I mean, a being who is not supposed to be present in that Universe to begin with, whose mere presence will inevitably cause problems for everybody, whether he wants to or not, seems like exactly the kind of individual that Chaos Magic would respond well to.
I was wondering why don’t the discords of the universe that are going to be destroyed sense and or prevent their destruction
Well at the very least Equestria has Airship's they can travel across Ocean's but I can't come up with any other information to make myself useful other than discord has a GPS tracking of Fluttershy 24/7 if told Fluttershy is in trouble and 9000795 I don't think EVERY grimdark Equestria result's in a apocalyptic level well killing the mane 6 actually dose with how many time's they saved the world in one form or another
Well.
9001055
True, but remember Discord said whatever corrupts these grim dark worlds spreads to other worlds, so it's your typical war, murder, slavery or nukes that are the issue. It's something far more powerful and dangerous otherwise why go for the final solution? Either save the world and stop its corruption or destroy it and stop the corruption from spreading.
9000832
He knows, Discord told that gift him with something to help him.
Sal just so far didn't bother to try to find what that gift is.
9000970
I asked this and many other plot breaking questions, and after several posts the answer is wait and see.
Either the author has some plans for the other Discords or he has no clue on what to do with this plot hole.
8993202
The original has long disappeared. But most of the truly Misanthropic crap has comes from a writer known as.... Chantoyance
Am I the only one who thinks it would've been a hilarious opportunity to shove the captain out the window? A massive cat sent flailing into the ocean in a hail of glass whilst trying to monologue hits far too many clichés not to be funny. But our protagonist is scared and actually trying to save the world instead of taking risks so I suppose I'll need to wait.
9001154
Well I mean the dude is like 9 feet and pure muscle. That would not have ended well for Sal...
Loving where this is going. I only hope Sal has a chance to actually fix this universe before it destroys itself, preferably be somehow saving or resurrecting the mane 6 and Spike. Also, can't wait for whatever abilities Discord might have given him.
9001077
Well if you wanted to make it easy or be lazy he can say it’s the chaos magic itself corrupting the worlds because there’s so many discourse in existence that is destroying them pretty much that’s the reason why he has a blowup thank you disc would like a power source he has to store only so much chaos at once if the world is soaked in it he can’t hold anymore and it makes the world fall apart And let’s say if they try to fix it it destroys the world or something I don’t know make up some arbitrary reason and then sa and let’s see if they try to fix it it destroys the world or something I don’t know make up some arbitrary reason Because they were destroyed in themselves And the remaining chaos will make a new spirit of chaos but I would not solve the problem pretty much you have a reality warper sacrificing themselves just so their world can continue on
Hey girl I made up a simple easy kind of explains why
Sorry I’m using my phone to type and he’s in the speaking typing function it constantly auto correct what I’m saying
9001249
You did not do a very good job of portraying his height, I had to go back and actually check if you'd given a specific height because all I could remember was that you'd mentioned he was tall. A seven to eight foot stature is not something you should be able to just ignore/forget, it should be reinforced every time the character speaks, the POV character should focus on how they loom over them whenever they talk, how their shadow extends over everyone in the group or how they blot out the sun when they stand by a window.
I put so much emphasis on this because it only took me about a paragraph to forget this guy was supposed to be a giant and it really ruins the impact of the scenes, especially the one where he lifts him up by his neck and threatens to tear his throat out, because I wasn't picturing an 8-foot tall monster doing that, I was picturing an oversized cat demanding attention. It's the difference between an intimidating villain and an impetuous man-child.
900242d
Fair enough. While I disagree that it has to be reinforced every time the character speaks, it wouldn't hurt to bring it up more often. I'm honestly not sure why I didn't seeing as how I've done so for other characters before. I'll make sure to give a more detailed description when mentioning him and other characters next time.
9001077
So far, it seems like he hasn’t even remembered that Discord invested him with any power other than the power to explode.
Liking what I’m reading so far. Looking forward to more.
9006613
Yup, so far we have no clue on what that gift is.
If it's chaos magic albeit much weaker than Discords of course, I'd just keep creating a pistol and kill myself, until every mlp verse is destroyed, out of spite for Discord and mlp.
This would make sense, bassicaly Sal would have Pinkie Pie powers.
Not outright reality breaking but strong enough to bend few things.
9008899
... well, at least you acknowledge your own shadow, I guess.
9008914
Well it is the most efficient to get the job done, and afterwards I can brag about having the highest kill count ever.
Far higher than. Hitler Stalin, or Mao Zedong combined.
I'd probably get my own personal hell right next to the Devil himself.
9008941
I worry about you, kid.
Maybe not very much, but I worry.
Right. I give up. Maybe if the meta-author you was actually in this situation, you'd do something useful.
9202949
Stop hating, dude.
Noone likes a troll.
Trolling is a timeless and honorable art. It is not simple or easy to execute. And it should not be confused with any casual expression of distaste. Do not disrespect trolling. That work is reserved for the troll.9246518
9000832
He remembers that if he dies, that universe will be destroyed... but conveniently forgets that he has a portion of DIscord's power because of plot reasons? I fear this story may have a severe case of Plot Convenience; it's often fatal.
10967037
Discord’s power only extends to seeing the crystals and breaking them I think
9008899
I would do that samething... No one said I HAVE to do this
Now I have known that Discoed goes crazy over Fluttershy and so you can guess how fucked they are going to be