So remember when I was just suddenly in Equestria? Everything had gone to hell and I died from blood loss like half an hour after I got there? Yeah well, I'm alive again and in a different Equestria... and this one doesn't look too much better...
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well seems like they found either an exposition fairy or a plot device to move the story forward.
thanks for the upload.
Still doing unpaid advertisement I see dude? Nice to see you back on this story again I wonder if this will lead to an interesting over arching pot of recovering the crystals. I wonder when we will see Prime Twilight again and what she see about Salvadore's actions?
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its back
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It never left. Just had to wait its turn in line.
Well this just got meta...
Finally caught up. The beginning was kinda rough but it quickly improves and becomes really good.
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So a generic 'meet the author' chapter arc?
... Ok, I'll be honest, I'm not sure I'm liking were this is going. This level of meta is usually reserved solely for crackfics for a good reason.
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Hey, feel free to make assumptions, just keep in mind that what happens next may not be what you expect.
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Well, you haven't exactly deviated from the old tired trope yet. I mean, "the SI is also the author who the SI meets, only to find they (the author) are slaved to the story they are writing" is an ancient trope that has been done... well, a lot.
There are a lot of mutations of it, ranging from "not actually the author, but a form the mind can comprehend" to "literally the person typing this" but it is still all the same bleh trope.
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Look, I don't know what you're planning and I won't pretend to. I just felt really disappointed by the reveal after all that build up and am kinda venting.
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Fair enough, I'm not sure exactly what it was you were hoping for, but sorry the build up didn't live up to the hype. I know the trope has been done before, it wouldn't be a trope if it wasn't. That said, I don't think all tropes are bad, and this is a trope I happen to like.
Sorry if it's not your thing, but imma do what imma do. That said, I do hope you stick around cause I have a lot more story to tell beyond this 'tired' trope.
Say whaaaaat? I feel like I've had unbidden questions answered only to be consumed in many more. I'm excited to see where this goes! Onwards!
At least Tucson is out of the way in kinda its own little area. Me? I was born in Mesa. Now that's truly cramped.
(And for those of you not from that area who might not know it's Tu Son. The C is silent. Why? I have no idea. )
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Thief: Deadly Shadows. The location in question is Shalebridge Cradle.
wow i am realy starting to like this story and i am only at the beginning of Equus 3