So remember when I was just suddenly in Equestria? Everything had gone to hell and I died from blood loss like half an hour after I got there? Yeah well, I'm alive again and in a different Equestria... and this one doesn't look too much better...
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Welp
Inappropriate comma splicing as part of your dialogue-tagging(???). I notice now because this chapter is especially dialogue-heavy.
Damn. Infiltrated and they never knew it. Like it or not, changelings are terrifying when they’re competent.
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Ay the canon Chrysalis is beyond dumb.
Dam Changeling can be scary
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Shame they rarly getthat treatment.
Some how this makes more sense then just being callously punished Celestia and leaving the creature alive, I expect Equestria doesn't have much left of it anymore of it. I wonder what Discord want to use Dome Twilight next to her and bother explaining everything to her considering that she is just an other failed Twilight? I wonder what happen to the pore guy with what ever happened in trying to fix his eye sight?
Huh... Didn't see that coming
For a moment there, I thought it was Thrackerzod.
I FELT this. Great job writing Equus 3 Twilight here. Also, I ship it.
I'm gonna guess the offer is to go with Salvatore on his dimensional hops.
I like how you introduced a new antagonist that I didn’t expect. That’s how you write fiction.
*Flails.* How did I catch up so easily!? Aaaaaa!!! AND RIGHT ON THE
BESTMOST ANNOYING CLIFFHANGER.9524201
Yeah, sorry about that, bad habit of mine...
I have some other stories you could check out in the meantime if you're interested. Next story to be updated is Sparkle before the updates cycle back to the most recent of my stories.
Chrysalis wins! End of the story! Thanks for writing!
(sigh...I know she's just gonna git obliterated...)
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Á la Groundhog Day
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The movie edge of tomorrow is like his predicament
you might even say the game was rigged from the start. MMMMMMMMMMMMMMM XD