So remember when I was just suddenly in Equestria? Everything had gone to hell and I died from blood loss like half an hour after I got there? Yeah well, I'm alive again and in a different Equestria... and this one doesn't look too much better...
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Okay...
Yikes. Big time. This came as a surprise, though in retrospect, I really should’ve known something like this was coming. This won’t be good for either of them.
Well, I guess at least if he dies, they all get exploded (or imploded, maybe. Or just cease to exist). But not much consolation for Salvatore.
Wait, what if she turned that giant sharp needle on the captain and the pig? Well, then again, Rarity probably wouldn’t have the courage to kill them, and it’s pretty hard to knock them out quickly with a needle, albeit a very sharp one.
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Who's to say that she is only holding the needle?
Cliffhangers..... Why'd it have to be cliffhangers
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If it makes you feel any better there's really only a few ways this can logically go.
9078500
True, true.
And then the Riot happens, or the crew mutiny's, or Charybdis shows up, or Discord shows up riding a Pinata pony wielding an Italian sub and beats everyone until marinara covers the ship.
I can hardly wait to see. ^^
The huge monster thing that is probably kill them all made me think of a specific song, a Mariners song
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A you do remember that this is grimdark right? so this can go many ways, like so.
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Lmao no he dead B
I think Rarity is going to kill him, and then we see what happens when he dies from Rarity’s point of view.
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Agreed.
Remember not to make things too dark, or you get Darkness Induced Audience Apathy.
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With what I have planned, I'm not too worried about that. And besides, I've already written a fic that's much darker than this one (so far) and that one seems to be doing just fine.
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it's more the 8 deadly words to be worried about, and so far that's not happening.
Fool commit jihad quick