So remember when I was just suddenly in Equestria? Everything had gone to hell and I died from blood loss like half an hour after I got there? Yeah well, I'm alive again and in a different Equestria... and this one doesn't look too much better...
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I gotta agree with Sal on this one. The silence is sometimes the freakiest part.
I got a little freaked out the moment I read the chapter title, but you did a very good job capturing the essence of freakinesss and creepiness.
Are the spider thingies the ponies in Ponyville transformed? It mentions the first one was purple, and then five more appeared (possibly making the Mane Six), but Sal was just teleported inside by presumably a Unicorn with magenta magic, though I suppose it could be him reactively using his powers without realizing it... Hm. Looking forward to finding out!
They were calling Sal mommy because they were going to lay a bunch of eggs all up in him.
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I'm willing to bet that the first spider at least was Spike.
I hope we yet to find out how these things were made
where is the cheap hair/bug spray and lighter when you need it?...
because we are really gonna need it...
This will turn out to be a good one, it think.
You know for a guide that’s on surviving Grimdark he apparently really isn’t that good at it. Oh well, cheers to a new Equus III! May we have more Spider-Spikes to go around! Keep writing with all the grace and skill you can!
I liked this, dang cliffhanger!!!
IDK why, bust when I saw this, I thought bioshock.
Well damn, now I'm curious to see what kind of monstrosity Twilight has turned into.
I imagine that we all agree that this is the last thing we want to hear a child say in a grimdark universe.
Also
[Indeed very deep intake of oxygen]
MOTHERF***ING CLIFFHANGER .
I still wait for the time where (or would it be when?) Salvatore will enter a universe ass kicking everybody
Dam you really scared me with this chapter now from what I can see these things seem to only appear when there's dread now what is the state of equestria at the moment is the biggest factor in which Salvador could save this world if these spider things are contained in ponyville then Salvador could save this universe but if it's a out of control virus spreading everywhere and the mane 6 the princesses and the military failed to contain this then apart from the Crystal Empire and other places with giant shields Equestria is doomed and the world is doomed and Salvador is here to put it out of its misery (and give Twilight more nightmares/visions)
This is easily one of the more scary chapters.
well this looks bad, what could go wrong here?
Ah, there it is. the fuckening
I HAVE SPOTTED A GRAMMATICAL MISTAKE, THE WHOLE CHAPTER HAS. BEEN. R U I N E D.
Atmospheric tension is probably the most universally-effective kind of dark.
It reminds me of a particular building from a (surprisingly) non-horror video game: although the building is abandoned, there’s the sound of... something else inside, but the place’s echoey acoustics make it pretty much impossible to accurately pinpoint where that something is. Not helping this are the clanging gates and dim-at-best lighting.
Not gonna lie, I got shivers down my spine when they multiplied.
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What game?
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Yes that’s the point it’s a Grimm dark survival guide in a grimm dark universe you don’t survive making the survival guide completely useless
The fuck were those... Spike? If so the heck happened to him?!